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Disappear(short)

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Disappear(short)

Postby neversnooze » Oct 5th, '08, 21:27

in life we all will disappear

the moonlight foreshadows a shadow
a widow of the dark on her or his own
himself or herself unknown like a celestial sky
whether to weather how do you know
emotions change, the climate is unknowable

the sun speaks with kinesthetic using heat
overcast to hide the lies,baked to a degree
proportions uneven due to deceit,
live is to love and then to dust
burning until altered to ashes
perished, disappear into thin air
Sometimes I stay up so late that I have my morning coffee before I go to bed
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Re: Disappear(short)

Postby Emadyville » Oct 5th, '08, 23:10

Damn I'm guessing that's meant as poetry? It's good man. Very deep, good use of vocab.
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