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Remorseless

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 6th, '08, 01:59

I'm a Battle Master I straight Tackle Rappers like u Had No Swagger cuz my Tracks Go Past Words
u couldn't bring beef if u were a Cattle Jacker if u still wanna Grapple After u'll get Hastled Faster

then a Terrorist on Halloween, so Bear Yur Fists and yur Shallow Dreams and take Off Tha Mask
face it I Got Ya Back u Bought A Raft for tha "rain" Talk Up That u got everything but a Lotta Facts

how could u be So Fake, I'll leave yur Skull Scraped go against me No Way I'm Realer
then yur Dealer doper than tha Squealer so go get tha pigs don't u know this Steel Works

so if u Start Narcing tha blood loss will leave yur Heart Starving for a Transfusion
it'll be crazier Than Viewing a Man Spewing up his Insides and then watching Him Die!
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Re: Remorseless

Postby Emadyville » Oct 6th, '08, 02:10

Damn you always come with sick rhymes! This might be one of my favorites, just twisted, greatly written, and your weird length in lines is great with all the rhymes you put in there. Keep them coming. :y: :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


I love you Daren
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Re: Remorseless

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 6th, '08, 02:14

thanks much, I was gone for a minute recording and enjoying tha birth of my first child
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Re: Remorseless

Postby Emadyville » Oct 6th, '08, 02:54

Rain Matrix wrote:thanks much, I was gone for a minute recording and enjoying tha birth of my first child


Damn good to hear both of that. Would like to hear some shit from you. Post it. And congrats on the baby. :b: :b:
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Re: Remorseless

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 6th, '08, 02:58

:happy: :y: :y: :whistle: :y: :y: :happy:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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