World as I Know it

[Ka0t1c]

this world as i know it
is growin so much colder
we're closer to a war, with no warnin
our soldiers are goin forward
so the horror's not over
we're bordered on all four corners
and i'm paranoid cuz of mortars
now my motive's well motored
before us
they wanna destroy our headquarters
but my morals won't let it, no mournin
instead i'm brainstormin
up sorts of ways that the forum
may support today a reborn space at our portal
don't ignore your own or
they may, your stories, go spoiled

Kaotic's immortal and my name McCoy's still on soil
and i pray you are loyal cuz boy you'll pay Hell n boil
just stay out the door-ok, it's my court and my quarrel's
displayed with my vocals, start takin your oral


i was going to make this a chorus originally but got carried away

[Solace]

wtf? i already posted on this. whered it go? whatever.


It was good, id like to see this as like a full song. No lines that stood out for me, but it was overall good.

[mcZu]

It would have sounded great as chorus
As actual verse, I dunno it has potential. You should finsih it, if it isn't finished..
Lyrics are nice, really some nice lines.
Alott of people could relate to it , even though you have your own meaning behind it
So you shoul defintly make it longer, nice piece dude

[enjinn]

i was feeling this...real nice imagery