Shit I foudn for mwhen i was a noob

[The Toy Soldier]

I was gonna go on a track with Tornado to try and get my name a little more out there so he let me spit a verse on his track but becuase of ahrdware issues I couldnt record it.

wel lhere was my verse:

Give me a good reason why i shouldnt cause this treason
reason why i shouldnt slit your shit and pound u out ur wit
time for me to feast all nite dont know why this feels all right
call it sin call it evil call it whatever you may
either way you feel this pain, to never see again the light of day
cant escape me cant run now ur future has no other way
but to just lay on the floor for me to feast dont leave, just stay
this day that you proclaim of dead has given you the chance
to spend some time with me the dead that has given you the trance
no time to continue the torment of ur dreams
ill lick the blood off all those seams
leave you to just stay and scream
i may be gone for now i may have not gotten my feed
but at this time the next year i will finish the deed
crucafix and holy water are tools that you will need
because it will not be easy to get rid of me

[Chorus](wasn't intended to be used)
This menace of society
this feeling of anxiety
this evil just consumes me
i have no reason to be
but i will not leave
you will all just see
that i am free
to creep until this day
this dead day of halloween

the theme is supposed to be af a zombie's perspective and he wants a fresh meal.

this is olike the first shit i spat on here.

drop me a comment thanks.

[Ka0t1c]

naw, i couldn't follow thru, it just seems off too much for me to handle

[The Toy Soldier]

naw, i couldn't follow thru, it just seems off too much for me to handle

uhh dont quite get what you mean

but hey that was liek preliminary shit

[Robbie G]

It didn't seem to flow well.
A few good rhymes though keep it up.

[The Toy Soldier]

It didn't seem to flow well.
A few good rhymes though keep it up.

oh yeah btw the flow isnt fast or even normal paced its supposed to be slow so that might solve ur flow problems

jus twanted to point that out.