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NEW STEVE SPAG - Misery Loves Company

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NEW STEVE SPAG - Misery Loves Company

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 13th, '08, 05:07

Alright, well just found this beat about half-hour ago and just had to write something to it. It's really creepy, well the hook is, I really don't know what it's saying but it sounds cool, lol. The beat changes around the 8th bar, so I kinda switched the style to go along with it. If you wanna check the beat out it's called "Misery Loves Company" by Shadowville over on Soundclick. Hopefully you get the flow for it. Anyways, let me know what ya' think, any and all feed is appreciated.

i like to live in the darkness, up in a corner upstairs//
i'm cowered over with paper, it's kinda holdin' me there//
it grabs and bolts to my stomache, it's pullin' all of my hair//
it is my thoughts that it's huntin', they keep on runnin' off scared//
i can't escape 'cause i'm strapped, my arm is twisted and wrapped//
up on the top of my shoulder and it is itchin' my back//
i got no keys for the latch, i'm on my knees and it's sad//
i keep invisioning things, i see me freeing my past//
ha ha ha ha, 'cause it's all a trap//
this time it got me good, i keep on fallin' fast//
i need to get back up and just haul my ass//
so put the calls on hold, i've got to mold some tracks//
and you better know that this old-timer won't crash//
most rhymers flow wack, go find 'em in trash//
i hoe 'em to ash, with dope poems i bash//
hope everyone knows i won't be slowin' a tad//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Misery Loves Company

Postby gladimnotsoluble » Oct 13th, '08, 06:55

needs to be recorded
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Misery Loves Company

Postby Solace » Oct 13th, '08, 14:47

Sick man, just sick. Flow was on, lyrically it was nice.

it is my thoughts that it's huntin', they keep on runnin' off scared//
i can't escape 'cause i'm strapped, my arm is twisted and wrapped//

Nice, and not cause they were long :p


as he said^ needs to be recorded man.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Misery Loves Company

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 13th, '08, 16:41

Thanks for the feed guys, glad you liked it. I'll deffinetly get to recording this one, I like the way it turned out also.

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Misery Loves Company

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 13th, '08, 19:53

I'd say that yur definitly a well defined writer and yur transitional rhymes were nothing short of awesome... keep posting man :y: :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Misery Loves Company

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 15th, '08, 17:11

^^
Thanks a lot man, much respect.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Misery Loves Company

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 17th, '08, 03:24

yeah Steve, this piece is great, keep up the good work, i see you're really focused
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Misery Loves Company

Postby SajN » Oct 19th, '08, 16:48

Pretty damn nice piece!
I liked the rhymes, flow was pretty good!


sry for late reply, been busy
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