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!! DIRRTY DREAM !!

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!! DIRRTY DREAM !!

Postby mista slimy » Oct 19th, '08, 17:45

hey yo !! i wanna present you ma latest rhymes i did :) .. i know that some of u would be prolly rollin' on tha floor but i will accept every opinion u'd leave in here :) so it goes like ...

lotz of nights i spent in ma fuckin' room
starin' out the window seein' the light of the moon
listenin' to ma favourite artists
whisperin' of what they sing
thinkin' i could be now in da club havin' a drink
seein' them bitchez dancin' on tha flo'
within sight some wankstaz passin' a dro'
with blank expression, yea 'tiz me on a sofa
some lady iz lookin' at me wit so seductive eyez
me imaginin' her goin' down - yea dat'z nice
she'z gettin' closer and closer with her sexy underwear
does anyone couldn't care?! bout how she was movin' her tight ass
me was like "sup hunny " with eyez lookin' at her tits
then i felt on ma neck her cherry-chapsticked lips
dj'z kickin' music like he's neva before
out from tha speakaz i can hear " lemme see dat ass roll"
some minutes later we were outta that place
sittin' in ma car for another "fuck in ass" race!
parkin' lot full of brand new cars
but no one could shove their dick in so much hot arse ! (aww)
she was screamin' out loud ma fuckin' name
so i had to prove her i'm not such a lame
after all happened wit her numba on ma phone
i was doin' eighty-seven straight to ma shitty home
head full of thoughts, dirrty handz on the wheel
i see the light of the moon - what tha fuck does it mean ?
openin' ma eyez i realized it'z just a fuckin' dream.. damn
Last edited by mista slimy on Oct 19th, '08, 18:39, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: dirrty dream

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 19th, '08, 18:02

hey thanks for dropping u inspired me to have some fun with this or at least try
I know I'm just a lame robot sounding MC but I do have may moments of inspiration
so onward I go to drift out at sea a vast ocean from which tha depths will surely swallow
me whole... :y: :y:
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Re: !! DIRRTY DREAM !!

Postby Solace » Oct 19th, '08, 20:24

:laughing:

That was uh. Interesting.


It wasnt bad, but im just not into the whole Baby Fuck Me songs.
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