Da world iz rotten

[lilrossy]

aye ya'll im jus jotin how da world is rotten,
don't know how we've gotten to bcum rock bottom,
everyday people bleed in an act of greed,
sellin coke & weed, jus tryin to succeed,
dare's people lying, crying, people dying,
people commiting crime & doin time,
everynight dares fights out in sight,
we got presidents gettin sniped out & swiped,
racist acts & terrorist attacks,
we off tracks, im jus statin da facts,
someones shot dead, next second it repeats,
our earth run red from da blood in deez streets,
we be livin in black & white, need to step in da grey,
to change da way dat we live today,
nothins perfect in dis world, yea i know,
but if work together, we can only grow.

jus sumthin i put together quik awhile ago.

[JMG]

I liked the messege.. rhymes were kinda simple... but u had the flow.

[lilrossy]

yea i thought the rhymes were to basic. thnks 4 da feedbak!