Teenagers

[lilrossy]

Demons inside dat only violence & drugs can tame,
so we drinkin, smokin, wishin, hopin for no more pain,
cuz its inzane, everday is da same, our sustain,
to take-away da strain is the things we do to entertain,
we got chioces dat are good & bad like guns & roses,
but sum how we always takin two at a time like moses,
like makin money but then snorting it up our noses,
i can show ya's poses, layin in dare rooms wit bottles and hoses,
week by week we be dealin wit deez everday taunts,
deez situations got all crosses & no naughts,
we fought for our thoughts tryin not to get caught,
shit dat would land us in court, leave our parents distraught,
doin sumthin we anit suppose to, not listnin to our senses,
leavin us wit profound and irrovocable consequences,
got us runnin from da police, jumpin ova benches & fences
double offences got us livin in detention centers.

open 4 feedbak!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

dope verse...enough said

yeah very good vocab there

[lilrossy]

thanks man. im only 16 so got alot to learn, but good to know dat it aint too bad.

[JMG]

nice

[Solace]

yeah it was good!



ps.nice avy (iDont Give A Fuck )

[Ka0t1c]

Hell yeah bro, that is a good verse, u should definitely stay writing and posting here

[lilrossy]

thanks for all da feedback, really appreciate it.

[Rain Matrix]

really good piece... if I may correct u tho it was Noah who took two at a time not Moses
unless u were referring to something else

[lilrossy]

lol. true, good point. never been to church so cut me some slack. haha, thnks for da feedback

[Rain Matrix]

it's cool just thought I'd point it out... this was a good drop tho regardless

[lilrossy]

thanks man