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Re: My Rhyme Book....

Postby JMG » Oct 24th, '08, 23:44

fuck harassing you i'll stash you in a play pen,
flip the dagger backwards and stab you with the blades end

that was my favorite, all were dope as hell tho.
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Re: My Rhyme Book....

Postby preest » Oct 24th, '08, 23:51

fucking sick mate, got a bit of a pissed off slim shady feel to them!!
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Re: My Rhyme Book....

Postby Robbie G » Oct 25th, '08, 01:29

Good sutff

I liked the jew and russian verse
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Re: My Rhyme Book....

Postby Emadyville » Oct 25th, '08, 03:50

Pretty Fucking Sick dude.
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Re: My Rhyme Book....

Postby Arabian Shady » Oct 25th, '08, 10:12

nice rhymes bro

Your only guessing with gimmicks.. .
winning is still a loss, like in the Special Olympics


i must say that was very well thought off, pretty clever
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50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: My Rhyme Book....

Postby yoshi » Oct 25th, '08, 22:56

Maybe, you're a fuckin genius. for real, your lyrics are brilliant, funny and retarded but in a good way. you know what i mean, you sound like a total freak, pedo and sociopath and that's why i like it so much. you're like Necro, Eminem and a bit of Apathy in one.

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Re: My Rhyme Book....

Postby Xray » Oct 25th, '08, 23:00

another classic piece/s

by the way, your rhyme book is huge, took me a while to read :whistle:
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: My Rhyme Book....

Postby Solace » Oct 26th, '08, 02:39

Illllll man :y:

winning is still a loss, like in the Special Olympics


fuck harassing you i'll stash you in a play pen,
flip the dagger backwards and stab you with the blades end


dude, smoke this dope that I rolled, its home made
I cant smoke man, I fucking overdose on rolaids


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Re: My Rhyme Book....

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 26th, '08, 15:16

you're so dirty... lol


good stuff, err BAD!...BAD, BAD, BAD, very BAAADDD!!!!!!!!!!!! :zipped:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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