Thank The Writers

[Ka0t1c]

hi, may i add my two cents in
i just wanna say that i'm always listenin
and everyday's a new way
so just stay true then you'll get to lay
your prints in what's been paved,
to the hip hop addition
cuz you'll always remain on the main
list to get mentioned
because you've became a face to the tradition
of our age cuz you've positioned your faith with ambitions
to make a change since your entrance
takin no breaks so you'll gain strength not just inches
like your rank's one of the biggest
cuz the stakes which exists you erase from your pivots...
it's great you've placed rivets and to this date you do give it
a good name, pushin limits, not afraid, nor a gimmick
you're the aid with each sentence, gainin our interests
which have saved many friendships cuz you gave us our wishes
to be brave, that's the mission, not a slave to dementia
til our grave comes to finish the craves of demented brains in this plain demension
i thank your intentions

[James R.]

Not bad. Rhyming is pretty basic. I'd really like to see the finished product. My biggest advice would be to get a little more complex with your thoughts. Get creative. Sometimes the more abstract the better.

[Ka0t1c]

James, you should know that i already know that by now