Late One Night

[Rain Matrix]

Cold N Lonely I'm Frozen Homey but without Tha Ice I don't spit what I know Ya Like
I pick up a pen Ta Write my depiction Of Life as I Know It, yeah that's what I Go With

fully Focused, Not Quite this Drop Might Stop Fights or Provoke War
it's whatever Ya Hope For when u Hear Rain I no longer Fear Pain

I'm not Worthy to Even Exist Treason Gets It so why am I Leaving Next Kid
it's like Breathing Chestless without Lungs but still I grab a mic and Douse Um

untill there's Flooded Streets and after they'll say tha Blood Did Leak
tell me who does Judgement Seek is it tha white boy on a low Budget Beat
please don't Fuck With Me, third world countries wouldn't Touch This Beef

[Xray]

yeah your lyrics are pretty good. your usually lyrical, but you need some street-ness in your lines. If you add some streety punch lines your shit be doper. but good drop none the less.

[mcZu]

Liked it man, especially this part:

I'm not Worthy to Even Exist Treason Gets It so why am I Leaving Next Kid
it's like Breathing Chestless without Lungs but still I grab a mic and Douse Um

Nice job, keep it up

[James R.]

The "3rd would countries wouldn't touch this beef" was fuckin hot. I love the vibe it gives off. You've improved since I've last been on here. Your flow was much tighter than I remember. And I really like this rhyme scheme you have goin on. Sounds like it would transfer really well to audio. I like it man. Keep it coming.