sumthin new

[Myszon]

yo. check this out. but keep in mind that my english is not very good <if it is possible, you can correct my mistakes..btw... it's real story>

'Lemme ask a simple question
who's goin to win this rap election?
I know, not me, but mayby oneday...we'll see
everyday I stand at front of mirror
I see white sad boy.
he's sad cuz his mom is bad, and his dad is still in job
he's not poor, but he's damn sad
this feelin' turns into bein' mad.
only thing which makes him happy is rap.
he's is home, weather's sux, it rains. raindrops are makin kap kap.
he wants to stop bein' damn mufucker, who's pissin' on everythink.
he's bad cuz his mom hated him so much
but he loves her, he wants to touch her heart.
she was screamin', and she was kickin' his ass
she hates him, he hopes she will die
it's not lie, there are true stories
now noone worries 'bout him
cuz everyone's sain "it's bullshit"
but seat down, hear it again,
he's life is only pain
he's soul is near hell
only what i want to tell yall
that, it's my life, this boy is me
you heard my story, now you see?
im not tryin' to be like eminem or someone other who's life was hard
now im strong, im gettin onward
i hope, that oneday everythin' will change...'

[lilrossy]

dont no if it was suppose to be a poem or a rap, but i thought the flow was pretty bad. but the story and concept wasn't to bad. anyway needs sum work.