Karma

[The Toy Soldier]

you always thought you could say shit about me
but now it turned on you, don't try to doubt me
I told you so slut, you got bad notions
think its funny to talk shit, better watch your motions
look behind your shouldewr and toss some salt while your at it
cuz you know your fucked now, shits building up like static
you were awlasy an impulse, but now your just envied
you shoudla just stop being fake cuz lifes as real as it gets
you can't escape now you ho, your at stake on all of these bets
tried to make fun of me 'member? saying i was gonna jack off
in 4th hour, wheres your boyfirend? wait no HES the wackjob
so i dumped you 5 times bitch get the fuck over it
your little comments plus, my temper? you lucky i lowered it
Saying im gay when you cant watch what you say?
no fucknig wonder your always with a new man
but yet you get the same old one still mad
yet you best firneds with the one whos condom had slipped off
and i didnt even fuck you, and now i'm your rival? shit ho you trippin
by the way i laughed my ass off and was flippin
when i heard that you got shanked in the eye
"she got stabbed" "wait man she coulda died"
haha see karams a bithc aint it what comes around goes around?
now your right eye aint moving? glass? oh loo kwhat ive found
go crying home so sad nobodys on you ho work tippin
so you need to quit your bitching, cuz ur the one snitchin


ok the stroy behind this was becuase earlier my bitch ass ex got stabbed in the eye with a pencil and i (although kinda fucked up) used this as inspiration to write and express how i felt when i heard) it may not make sense cuzi usually speak in a different form of dialect when i express myself so if u cdont think it makes sense then its aight i just want to see what you guys think.

[mcZu]

Stabbed in her eye with a pencil???
Even though it's a fucked up topic to base your lyrics on, it's still good for you to put your thoughts on paper and leave what happend in the past.
The dialect you use was some times confusing, but still a good drop.
Filled with emotion, flow was ok, rhymes were not bad
overall a nice piece

[The Toy Soldier]

Stabbed in her eye with a pencil???
Even though it's a fucked up topic to base your lyrics on, it's still good for you to put your thoughts on paper and leave what happend in the past.
The dialect you use was some times confusing, but still a good drop.
Filled with emotion, flow was ok, rhymes were not bad
overall a nice piece

Thanks man means alot I'l ltry to not get off topic next time and keep my writing at high dialect yet still sensible.

and yeah lol she got in a fight and got stabbed in the eye wit a pencil