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The one that got away

Postby Cartman » Nov 9th, '05, 21:33

Im new to this - im not up to par with the rest of yall who post here so jus take it for what it is. I lost the one girl who understood me cause i was fuckin stupid and now she's pregnant and engaged (we are still friends though)..

Sometimes in life things get mix up,get SO hard
i cant control my actions so i fall a..part
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Re: The one that got away

Postby Darjan333 » Nov 9th, '05, 21:55

Cartman wrote:don
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Postby Cartman » Nov 10th, '05, 05:23

Yep that is his..and i aint mean no harm with that - just couldnt make that bit work without it - but ive changed it a bit - works better for me know. Anywayz propz for the comment.
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Postby Trigger » Nov 28th, '05, 23:37

good spit, srry wat happend tho, shu it will all work out pce!!
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Postby shadypelkey » Nov 29th, '05, 01:05

K first off me and Dan do not, I repeat do not accept your apology or any type of sorryness, and ah if ur wonderin why? read your name a couple times and you will figure it out hopefully, and maybe a couple...no no all of your replys/posts towards us. Think hard bout that, all we did was tell the truth, which something you must be not capable of, maybe it would benifit you more if you actually rapped about tru shit, and make up fibs aight, but yo no hard feelings, just sayin what I gotta say to get through pceeee!

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Postby Nu Syd » Nov 29th, '05, 02:16

good lines man
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