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Heightened Awareness

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Heightened Awareness

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 17th, '08, 22:55

This piece of writing was done in 30 minutes...and just came to me out of nowhere..

Wandering steadily in the readily awakening ceremony
where lyrical dexterity combines within me by the holy matrimony
aimlessly awaiting my fate to be in the balance of suspension
violence with prevention, within the solstice of dimension
countless fabrications of my linguistic formulations
of algorithms programed to inject venomous rhythm operations
rippin' fabrics with a generated matrix reality
converts actuality into a schizophrenic paranormal mentality
actually seeing the bleeding anatomy of humanity
when it's come time to see freedom is replaced with insanity
damnation provokes the tokens of symbolism emotion
egotistic commotion generates energy for egotistic locomotion
directed to the inspected bodies of political deception
those who have analytical minds can find diacritical perception
so they may distinguish who's fictitious and who's completely real
as I close this dialect with my reality seal.

Breathing darkness, deciding to ignite the flame but it's spark less
a worthless feasting for knowledge, looking at the tree of life but it's bark less
carefully wandering corridors within the library of Alexandria
gathering scrolls of knowledge, reading about depression and mania
internal resolutions discovers pollutions within thoughts
eternal illusions creates seclusions and blood clots
stressful situations is a connotation to self imposed probation
determining whether or not murderous tendencies will stay in rotation
around the consciousness, side affects include headaches and tiredness
super developed intellect projects and receives brainwaves like wireless
however the clever word smith crafts words and letters
is a result of mental strength and the desire to become better
creating works of art like a Picasso painting, beauty enough to provoke fainting
enunciating visual artistry which is painted by the words I am stating
elevating awareness to prepare for the future generations
If I succeed a new breed of knowledge will be praised through celebrations.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Heightened Awareness

Postby Solace » Nov 17th, '08, 22:59

That was complex as fuck. But i wont blame you, i was the one telling you to post it up. Your really good with multies, and if you understood it then wow :o Some of the liens that i just understood were like FUCK :o i liked the 2nd half better, mainly cause i understood it more but it was still written fire. keep it up, 9/10! :worship:
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Re: Heightened Awareness

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 17th, '08, 23:02

shadymademe wrote:That was complex as fuck. But i wont blame you, i was the one telling you to post it up. Your really good with multies, and if you understood it then wow :o Some of the liens that i just understood were like FUCK :o i liked the 2nd half better, mainly cause i understood it more but it was still written fire. keep it up, 9/10! :worship:

Thank you bro! I appreciate the feed :sweating:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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