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TwoWurdz

Postby lilrossy » Nov 29th, '08, 08:40

two wurdz, two faces, two birds, two places,
one game, two races, one fame, to many fakers,
it's inzane, all deez spaces, to many life takers,
dats why i tie deez laces & spit thru deez fucin braces,
two wurdz, one mic, tonight, one light,
black 'n' white, doesn't matter what ya type,
hold dat mic fucin tight, cuz in life we all alike,
gota problem, take a hike, no time for a hip hop dyke,
two wurdz, one passion, to blurt, this rappn',
true compassion, one fashion, beatboxin, table tappin,
but nobody in rap is lastin, everybodys fucin strappin,
dats why im fucin blastin, leavin deez motherfucers gaspin,
two wurdz, one flaw, to much, fucin pain,
tupac, biggie smalls, both these cats fucin slained,
freaky tah, jam mater jay, also down the fucin drian,
every death is another gain, but rest in peace to those names!

just bored so i thought i'd write sumthin quick, don't thinks its dat good but anyway. for those who don't no, it's a take off of kanye's two words. let me know what ya think.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: TwoWurdz

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 30th, '08, 18:19

that's hot .. i liked the why u rhymed with it ,, and nice rhymes and flow was good .. keep it up :y:
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Re: TwoWurdz

Postby lilrossy » Nov 30th, '08, 22:01

Thanks 4 da feedbak man. im glad you liked it.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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