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Postby J Roc » Dec 1st, '08, 03:22

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Last edited by J Roc on Dec 1st, '08, 13:20, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: J-R-O-C

Postby J Roc » Dec 1st, '08, 03:26

ohhhhh .... lightwork/.... just so i aint get rusty lol
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Re: J-R-O-C

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 1st, '08, 03:27

most of it i didnt like but these were clever...

just call me ah deserted island how i palm tree's


i'll blow sets andll leave ah "ring" like your wedding
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: J-R-O-C

Postby J Roc » Dec 1st, '08, 03:29

lol.. i like that palm trees line too .... that second one was filler lol ... props for reading though :y:
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Re: J-R-O-C

Postby Emadyville » Dec 1st, '08, 03:42

Palms trees was good, i liked the ending lol, it was decent good work :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: J-R-O-C

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 2nd, '08, 00:19

dots are not lyrics. Fail.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: J-R-O-C

Postby The Toy Soldier » Dec 2nd, '08, 00:40

J roc wrote:.....

killer content :y:
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