Tha Knockout Champ (Rain Matrix Diss!)

[J Roc]

uppin

[J Roc]

James R makes a really good point there^

Also this piece, your whole way of structure and rhyming reminds me of Rain Matrix too. The whole capitalization also reminds me of him. Nothing really special, im just saying i noticed it

Rain Matrix is 100x better than this guy, look at some of his posts he made on "Creative Writing".

Sorry J Roc this was just awful. With your rudimentary words, i wasnt impressed. Your examples were "eww nothing special" and "wtf?!" but you did rhyme during the whole verse.

4 out of 10

this guy full of himself^^^ obviosly dont understand what ah punch/wordplay is .... (Duh)

[MoBrat]

overall not bad some good punches but didn`t stay on topic all the way through...but seriously spell check ur shit next time man its TIM HORTONS not TIM HORTENS

[Evanz19]

Pretty good. 7.5/10. Dont bite my arm off, but what you got against Rain Matrix? Just asking.

[The Toy Soldier]

Pretty good. 7.5/10. Dont bite my arm off, but what you got against Rain Matrix? Just asking.

hes pissed cuz rain matrix always owns him lyrically so he tries to get back at him.

Liek em and benzino with rain being em.

[J Roc]

Pretty good. 7.5/10. Dont bite my arm off, but what you got against Rain Matrix? Just asking.

hes pissed cuz rain matrix always owns him lyrically so he tries to get back at him.

Liek em and benzino with rain being em.

awww tryina hurt my feeling's when i'm better then you & rain combined... ...... ask any other site that ain't stupid with lyrical ability

[The Toy Soldier]

Pretty good. 7.5/10. Dont bite my arm off, but what you got against Rain Matrix? Just asking.

hes pissed cuz rain matrix always owns him lyrically so he tries to get back at him.

Liek em and benzino with rain being em.

awww tryina hurt my feeling's when i'm better then you & rain combined... ...... ask any other site that ain't stupid with lyrical ability

lil wayne fansites do not have lyrical talents k get it got it good?

feelings fool what fucking feelings?

you tryna hurt mine posting that awful comment "better than you and rain combined"

[Solace]

lil wayne fansites do not have lyrical talents k get it got it good?

lol

[J Roc]

lil wayne fansites do not have lyrical talents k get it got it good?

feelings fool what fucking feelings?

you tryna hurt mine posting that awful comment "better than you and rain combined"

lol he making up things to diss me .... post 1 wayne forum i been on ... (....) ... nadda .... & i'm not tryina hurt your feelings ... trust it's the truth .... Real talk, 1

[James R.]

Ok kiddies, these disses are officially on some weezy shit. Why don't you two get back to the pen and pad and write some diss songs or smtn. Especially you, J Roc. Rain came at your ass hard and this doesn't match up in the slightest.

[4D]

Horrible structure, I stopped reading when I seen how disorganised it was. You don't have to capitalise your multi's, if readers don't recognise them that's their stupidity. I used to do that bullshit when I started, but it got old quick. Edit your lines so that it looks neater, it'll do you the world of good.