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taking away j's roc

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 5th, '08, 04:45

mister smack talks wack drop is nothing more than an obsession with caps lock
this is where tha rap stops bitch back off before a gat pops and u drop yur crack roc

u make tha dumbest music that's what's undisputed, I don't give a fuck if this Kid Doubts Rain
regardless of what his mouth claims dude's sucks every dick in compton trying to Spit Out Game

quit it j my balls have no more cum I used to like when u rolled your tounge
why u under my desk is there a cold war son I call u mannequin cuz u pose for um

go ahead amn bring a war quick so I can bury yur in tha force diss
u'll get dropped in a ring of corpses I'll let u act hard after Rigor Mortis

my trigger finger Still A Squeezing tha nerve of this Killa's Seizeing
causing yur body's Chill Ta Deepen pray to god I won't stop Till Ya See Him
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Re: taking away j's roc

Postby Robbie G » Dec 5th, '08, 04:52

damn..some nice lines there especially at the beginning. :worship:
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Re: taking away j's roc

Postby lilrossy » Dec 5th, '08, 04:56

Rain Matrix wrote:mister smack talks wack drop is nothing more than an obsession with caps lock
this is where tha rap stops bitch back off before a gat pops and u drop yur crack roc

man dat shit was awesome. :y:
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Postby James R. » Dec 5th, '08, 05:01

Rain Matrix wrote:mister smack talks wack drop is nothing more than an obsession with caps lock
this is where tha rap stops bitch back off before a gat pops and u drop yur crack roc

u make tha dumbest music that's what's undisputed, I don't give a fuck if this Kid Doubts Rain
regardless of what his mouth claims dude's sucks every dick in compton trying to Spit Out Game


Damn. Those 4 lines were fuckin fire.
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Re: taking away j's roc

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 5th, '08, 11:22

holy shit bro, j roc got"
" BITCH SLAPPED!!!"

that was awesome,lmao :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: taking away j's roc

Postby Nu Syd » Dec 5th, '08, 12:37

nice, if u were actually good with audios this woulda been amazing via audio, intro line killed it :y:
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Re: taking away j's roc

Postby tha Wangsta » Dec 5th, '08, 13:14

Rain Matrix wrote:mister smack talks wack drop is nothing more than an obsession with caps lock
this is where tha rap stops bitch back off before a gat pops and u drop yur crack roc

u make tha dumbest music that's what's undisputed, I don't give a fuck if this Kid Doubts Rain
regardless of what his mouth claims dude's sucks every dick in compton trying to Spit Out Game


:worship: Fucking awesome
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Postby Urban Punk » Dec 5th, '08, 16:18

Shit that was dope! Looks like J got served
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Postby Solace » Dec 5th, '08, 18:23

Ohhhh shitt! :o :worship:
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Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 5th, '08, 21:03

PWN3D! Nothing more to say.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: taking away j's roc

Postby 4D » Dec 5th, '08, 23:36

Nice job, some good personals in there. I liked the caps lock disses and some of the other punches.

Best line:

u'll get dropped in a ring of corpses I'll let u act hard after Rigor Mortis
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Re: taking away j's roc

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 6th, '08, 18:03

haha, the first line was awesome!!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Postby neversnooze » Dec 9th, '08, 05:04

the first 4 lines were good, murder j roc ya heard!!! :tounge2:
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Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 9th, '08, 10:21

that's was dope .. liked it
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