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Rain Falling On A Corpse

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Rain Falling On A Corpse

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 9th, '08, 17:09

go ahead j roc Spark The Issue your gonna drop as soon as I Start Ta Hit You
you talk shit like your Art Official but just like scott steiners muscle your Artificial

you'll be eating Quick Smacks a half dozen beers is the only time you rock a Six Pack
the difference between us, is I Spit Facts, your wack son nothing's gonna Fix That

you've been lyrically Bitch Slapped we all heard the Big Crack get off my Dick Fag
there's no homo in This Rap keep tripping and I'll stomp you till your Ribs Snap

so Breathe Deep, cuz I'll cremate ya body and get Released back to These Streets
it's not Easy to Beat Me so diss me again and you'll ly in a coffin with your Three Piece

suit your style to massive Brain Trauma if your gonna keep bringing the Same Drama
even the other Lames Wanna see me empty your blood and then make it Rain On Ya

this goes way beyond just another Battle this beef is dead like freshly slaughtered Cattle
I'm done being Hassled, your future won't be "clear" untill their done charging the Paddles!
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Re: Rain Falling On A Corpse

Postby James R. » Dec 9th, '08, 17:56

Not as good as your last diss, but still better than his latest. Nothing really wrong with it per se, the other one was just more creative... lmfao at spit out game... hilarious. Keep it up man. So far you're winning... by a lot
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Re: Rain Falling On A Corpse

Postby mcZu » Dec 9th, '08, 18:54

Nice structure, flow and vocab were great, some sick lines there. :y:
As for now J Roc has been ethered, this and your last diss are way better then his. :y:
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Re: Rain Falling On A Corpse

Postby The GameKeeper » Dec 9th, '08, 19:14

You killed him... he has no need to reply... J-Roc is 6 feet in the dirt.
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