Back Against the Wall (just finished moments ago)

[Robbie G]

That was great dude, I really felt the emotion when i read it. If anything some of the lines didn't flow well in my head, but that was more than likely just me.

Have you thought of recording?

[James R.]

Lol I'm working on getting the money together so I can get the equipment to record.

Thanks for reading though man.

[Slim Zaddy]

man that's hot .. i agree with the others , i hve noticed that u're really the best writer over here.. keep droppin man .,. i like ur writing

[James R.]

man that's hot .. i agree with the others , i hve noticed that u're really the best writer over here.. keep droppin man .,. i like ur writing

Thanks man I'm flattered. And I'll keep droppin no doubt Gotta do smtn til I can record ya know what I mean?

[Solace]

man that's hot .. i agree with the others , i hve noticed that u're really the best writer over here.. keep droppin man .,. i like ur writing

i agree

[James R.]

Oh you guuuyyysss. Lets have a shadymademe!

[Solace]

I'm An Asshole!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

passe me a shadymademe good work...
i agree wit yosh...sumtimes it felt more like a poem...but still good overall
chorus was extremely good...like yosh said..last and first line

[James R.]

Thanks for reading man

[Rain Matrix]

very well done your emotion and your message conveys well... please keep dropping

[James R.]

Thanks guys. And rain, you know I couldn't stop even if I wanted

[SajN]

Holy shit!

This is how I like lyrics!!

Not very difficult words!! Looks simple but is not. It's a complex masterpiece!

I admire your writing man



(I don't know if you remember me, but I was NoN-Stop/The Infection before, you always gave feed on my stuff )

[mcZu]

Great great, nice vocab, ill flow, structure was near perfect
Enjoyed reading it, keep dropping man

[James R.]

Thanks thanks I'll try to keep up this level of work