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Verse 1 from "Nor Easter"

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Verse 1 from "Nor Easter"

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 10th, '08, 20:42

I'm Sleep Deprived my life isn't an Easy Ride globalists with Greedy Ties
don't hear the Needy Cry but I got god to Speak Beside
and sticky bud to Keep Me High so we can all Smoke To That
watch as I Roll Through Tracks and Flow True Raps
that are Solid as Gold when I Demolish my Foes
my mic will Acknowledge my Soul why should these Fakes Be Mentioned
against this Crazy Weapon rain matrix will Say He's Repping - 187
I'm after some paper Ta Count preferably larges Amounts
headed for my Account you can keep Tha Crown
all I needs a Sniper Rifle this Writers Psycho
enough to Ice Yur Vitals no telling when this Lifer Might Go
so I chill like a Hitman that would Disband This Land
he's a Big Damage Chance so respect His Stance
go ahead Spark Tha Issue I got Bars Ta Diss you
everyone knows my Art Official your just Artificial
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Re: Verse 1 from "Nor Easter"

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 10th, '08, 20:46

I borrowed a couple a lines form a recent piece...
this is just the first verse and this will be recorded
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Re: Verse 1 from "Nor Easter"

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 11th, '08, 12:10

that's was good i liked it .. Particularly your rhymes,, they were decent .. Keep droppin bro .. :y:
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Re: Verse 1 from "Nor Easter"

Postby James R. » Dec 11th, '08, 16:47

Nice multies. Probably the best flow I've ever heard from you (at least when I read). Nothing absurdly deep, but it was a good read.
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Re: Verse 1 from "Nor Easter"

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 11th, '08, 17:43

thanks for scoping this out people... I always appreciate feedback
I can't wait till this songs done

P.S. someone tell jroc to look at a weather map of the East Coast! 11:45 - 12/11/08 - Holla!
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Re: Verse 1 from "Nor Easter"

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 12th, '08, 17:03

man , if every verse is like that, i'd BUY that shit,lol
wiked wiked shit man, every bar had meanin and every bar was true,
got a question tho wat does the 187 stand for? city code????
plus this type of structure every now and then is sick,but that complex shit is all rain,man,lol
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Re: Verse 1 from "Nor Easter"

Postby mcZu » Dec 12th, '08, 18:27

Nice structure, flow was great, rhymes were nice :y:
Nice verse :b:
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Re: Verse 1 from "Nor Easter"

Postby Solace » Dec 15th, '08, 02:19

Nice flow, rhymes and multies. Keep it up man, you gunna post the full Nor Easter?
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