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Holdin Me Back

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Holdin Me Back

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 15th, '08, 06:49

posted up overseas most of us soldiers lead
in a world that's so corrupt and full of greed
but it's tough to be quarantined
our souls are not free, what is holdin me
back from my hopes and my dreams?

this land has no need as the sand flows with each breeze
so for oil should i bleed?
well, i hardly can breathe cuz of foreign debris
and my heart's not at ease now i'm startin to see
i'm fallin apart, i'm more than ordinary, war aint the key
my hobby is art and i'm supporting all peace
...to my doorway i'll reach one day and shortly we'll meet
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Holdin Me Back

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 15th, '08, 09:46

man, there is nothing holding you back... you have the talent and I believe in you :y:
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Re: Holdin Me Back

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 15th, '08, 13:00

thanx Rain & McMaybe! :thumbsup2:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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