Insanity (freestyle)

[Requiem]

everything u are about to witness is a freestyle...

verse 1
Went to the pshyce ward, got labeled crazy.
at the end of that street's where i mugged an old lady.
whistled for a cab, then jacked the taxi,
with some hollerin chicks up in the backseat.
goin 60 we collided with Bambi,
didn't look back, I kept the peddle down,
a few more blocks; hit the Fox and the Hound.
went flyin into the dash at the speed of sound.
i could feel myself turnin inside out.
waited a couple hours, before i respawned.
sick to my stomach, threw up on someones lawn.
*aww, what the hell???* Oh shit, here he comes.
the owner's pissed, wavin his meat.
big bird had a orgasm on sesame street.
what can i do, i need a beat.
i can't help i spit insanity....

verse 2 (will do eventually)

[Solace]

lol it was alright, not many multies but its as good as i can do. I liked the bambi line lol, but i messed up flow when i read that line. your gunna do a whole piece just freestyled?

[Requiem]

^yup. lmao, i was just rhymin off the dome. tryin to be random, i got a perfect beat for it too

[MC Anonymous]

Sub-par. You could do better then this -_-

[James R.]

Seen much better from you. Flow was off. Multies were lacking. Below average man. You can bring it harder than this.

[Rain Matrix]

This was okay for a freestyle... keep practicing that shit and sooner or later you won't believe what your doem comes up with when provoked by a MC

[Requiem]

alright, thx for the feed. probly won't use it for a song then. but i am going to write an insane song. hopefully it'l be much better than this. but i can't write crazy unless i'm inspired, u kno?

[neversnooze]

i liked it, it was simple, you went from jacking a taxi to sesame lol. good freestyle

[Slim Zaddy]

Seen much better from you. Flow was off. Multies were lacking. Below average man. You can bring it harder than this.