Lyrical Destruction [Fixed Flow]

[MC Anonymous]

[EDIT] How's the flow now?

I'm the lyrical gymnast doing verbal hurdles over beats
spittin' flows like aquariums that glow when written over sheets
cause' when fleets of wack MC's try to tempt me, my pen's tense
and I start writing with a heat so intense it melts the structure of a sentence
I battle MC's for ten cents, their men's sense is disappearing
cause' fightin' a MC like me will rupture ya vision and hearing
my precision your fearing, cause' I stay precise with rhyme
grab a dictionary and read, my verses will become concise with time
recite the lines, it flows like the Euphrates during a annual flood
eating MC's all day everyday, I must have some cannibal blood
dropping acapellas that stock my fella's with verbal dock propellers
to chop the tellers of wack rhymes into little pieces and block their sellers
you cocky dwellers stay lingering with the same rhymes, in do time
the true rhymes will overshadow your fake crew's lines
my rhymes like blue wine, unorthodox sorta out of the box
keep yellin', see what happens when you shout at a fox
I doubt you can box, seeing how your punchlines are sub-par at best
and my bars like breasts attractive and when removed can scar my chest
I'm so far from best, but I strive to increase my potential with instrumentals
attack with fiery elemental credentials then can indeed be detrimental
my rhythm is experimental, I flip it around like a switchblade
and with every heartbeat comes rhymes that bounce off my ribcage.

[Solace]

Fucking sick man as usual, just great, 10/10.

Cant wait for you to get recording and shit, its gunna be great.

[James R.]

grab a dictionary, read some pages, my verses will become concise with time

Lol nice

I doubt you can box, seeing how your punchlines are sub-par at best
and my bars like breasts attractive and when removed can scar my chest

Best of the verse

Nice drop man. Keep em comin.

[Kez]

Lyrics, punches etc is all there

But flow is not.

Apart from that though, nice job. Although most of it is just bragging, i can guess that more concepts are coming and this is just an exercise.

[MC Anonymous]

Lyrics, punches etc is all there

But flow is not.

Apart from that though, nice job. Although most of it is just bragging, i can guess that more concepts are coming and this is just an exercise.

Yeah thanks for the feed :]

[Boston]

yeah this is good shit
like kez said the flow. try to have the same amount of syallables in each line/bar

hence the dumber down lyrics ahem

[MC Anonymous]

yeah this is good shit
like kez said the flow. try to have the same amount of syallables in each line/bar

hence the dumber down lyrics ahem

Thanks

[Ka0t1c]

ehh, not working well for me

[Arabian Shady]

flow was solid, found that easily, i must say its wiked the way the length of the 4th line didnt affect the flow at all, wiked shit
multies and meta were entertainment at its best bro,
solid drop overall
Peace

[MC Anonymous]

flow was solid, found that easily, i must say its wiked the way the length of the 4th line didnt affect the flow at all, wiked shit
multies and meta were entertainment at its best bro,
solid drop overall
Peace

Thanks bro