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Da Rosstralian

Postby lilrossy » Dec 16th, '08, 08:25

Up in da QLD, they be callin me da king, da rosstralian,
bringin deez titanium flows dat gon blow ya fucin cranium,
dares no mistaking my cd gon be more radio-active then uranium,
nd i'll still be in da hood aming dem guns nd fucin flamin dem,
da way i bestow deez crafted lyrics, dude ima fucin pro,
get my way tho, blood will be pourin outa like menstraul flow,
hate fake mc's yo, so let me get to da point like a stileto,
u betta lay low, im sweepin deez mothafucas away like aids in da ghetto,
Hello!, i started dis gangsta shit, so when i hawk 'n' spit,
like a banana ya betta split, cuz my rhymes gonna go through ya like an ice pick,
cuz u can't spit, ur shit flopped like my dick when i saw ya bitch,
but me, i ain't gonna stop, so shit, jus give up nd fucin quit.

haven't written anything in a while, so let me know wat ya think.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Da Rosstralian

Postby noel » Dec 16th, '08, 09:13

Cool to see an Aussie in here... :wave: :wave: :wave:
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Re: Da Rosstralian

Postby lilrossy » Dec 17th, '08, 05:18

noel wrote:Cool to see an Aussie in here... :wave: :wave: :wave:

Yeah, bak atcha :wave:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Da Rosstralian

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 17th, '08, 05:22

weak, old material, basic, nothing stuck out at all :n: :n:

i dont even think it was good practice but maybe im just too picky &/or an asshole... :-k
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Da Rosstralian

Postby lilrossy » Dec 17th, '08, 14:54

Kaotic wrote:weak, old material, basic, nothing stuck out at all :n: :n:

i dont even think it was good practice but maybe im just too picky &/or an asshole... :-k

shit, i didn't think it was dat bad, i knew it was nuttin special tho. but thanx for readin & letin me no wat ya think anyaway. :y:
when otha people reply feed im hopin ur justa asshole tho :sweating: haha
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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