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Postby tjb » Dec 19th, '08, 17:37

verse 1
i am invisible or should i say invincible, cuz if ya cant see me it makes me way to capable
yea of something terrible, unbearable a bloody mess tht words dont summarize so i cant really digress
but ima try it anyway i guess, an i sorta wanna test ya test my limit, a killer at best, no more mr. timid cant puush any less, cuz if i slow down now im just a pussy at best
hope u understand, tht i cant lose this flow gotta keep up the game plan,
like a patriot, a giant, a new york met, wait rong sport back track, dont test, dont test,
no piss me off once an i wont forget, yes just piss me off once, an u will regret







ill drop more lata lost inspiration
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Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 19th, '08, 18:33

u need to fix this up better before u post it...imo
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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