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Bored Writings.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 19th, '08, 03:46

I'll look upon an obstacle with the savage optical
severe nostrils with punchlines and ravage hospitals
lyrical quartz crystals shine and burn tissues
smack destruction in the face and twist-n-turn issues
You don't want none of a pious MC
I'll box ya fuckin' head like a prious, tempt me
then we'll see who survives the nuclear blast
so you betta tell me who you fear fast
I speak lyrical Fahrenheit to burn every hair in sight
care to fight? I'll destroy you with verbal flares and lights
I'm a disaster stricking faster like cancer
I'll conjure your body like a necromancer
and kill you just to release my anger
fuck club bangers I appear courtesy of myself
attackin' fakers regardless of my mental health
However I spit it's the most clever shit
forever lit with the heat when the lever slips
the impact ruptures organs and livers
and my lyrics aren't meant for orphans or quitters
cause' my hands are widow makers
and my guns are called sick, quick blow bakers
I'll bring the heat like planetary seasons
spittin' reason with enough knowledge to hypnotize legions
of scientists with an iron fist, my iron's pissed
blast that shit as my military shotgun assists
I persist to deliver lyrical quality or quantity
obviously you're below my prolific odysseys
I advise you not to speak cause' if you do I'll sock ya teeth
if you block beneath it doesn't shield from the cocky thief
I'm so sick with the flow like period blood
shining rhymes, call me a serious stud
a furious stunt is when you try to disrespect God
the scope on my gun will make ya respect mods.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Bored Writings.

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 19th, '08, 03:58

i don't like the lyrics that much but the way it flowed was good, nothing great i thought :n:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Bored Writings.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 19th, '08, 03:59

Kaotic wrote:i don't like the lyrics that much but the way it flowed was good, nothing great i thought :n:

Yeah I wasn't really trying with this one. Just having fun.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Bored Writings.

Postby lil shade64 » Dec 19th, '08, 05:21

i thought it was pretty good. y dont u record it?
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Re: Bored Writings.

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 19th, '08, 06:09

talking about guns only promotes shooting :n:
I mean yeah it flowed but I'd rather hear a more positive message

in any event this was a decent showing and a worthwhile read
I just hope you shy away from gats a little more if you wanna have fun :y:
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Re: Bored Writings.

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 19th, '08, 20:46

i fear the length of your drops every time i open 1 of ur threads now,lmao!! j/k
openin was good, flow was off at a couple points, some lines were pretty clever tho
comapratively tho-its all ayte
not bad still ;)
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Re: Bored Writings.

Postby James R. » Dec 20th, '08, 00:47

Not bad man. Seeing as how you're just screwing around it's good shit. Gotta admit I was relieved it wasn't like 934875394857 bars lol
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