Alcoholic

[Slim Zaddy]

it's a short vesre ,, i hope you will like it though

Stuck, Im Trying to Be Drunk so Droppa Buck..
Yell at the Sky, Just so My Shit-Talk is-Up..Fuck
My Clover's Outta Luck. Choice to Drink-Or-Not
Fam Or Brew. Tell Me What Kinda Man Are You?
With-Drawin Puke-in cant Live Wittout a Can-or-2
Beatin-ya Wife what I'm Speakin is Right, I Might..
Have Got you Finally Thinkin Tonight. But i Might
cause you To Drink-More While you Think More..
A women Who Loves Brew. Men Think - Whore..
Group Homes and Jail For a Human Addiction, Listen
alcohoism is Sickinin. But I'm Stuck. Did i Mention?.

[Ice_Scarred]

Short and sweet. Pretty decent lines bro. 7.5/10

[Slim Zaddy]

Short and sweet. Pretty decent lines bro. 7.5/10

thanks man for checkin it out ,, much appreciated ..

[James R.]

Quick question: why do you capitalize random words? I thought it was to show multies, but it seems kind of sporadic. And you leave words like 'I' lowercase. Just wondering.

Anyways it was a good drop. I like the concept of it. I thought the rhyming was good, although I've seen you rhyme at a much higher level. It got to the point though which I like. A lot of times something is written about a topic, but the topic is like an underlying issue instead of the focus. You focused on it pretty well. Good job man. I'd like to see a long piece, maybe a storytelling piece with this. 7.5/10

[Slim Zaddy]

Quick question: why do you capitalize random words? I thought it was to show multies, but it seems kind of sporadic. And you leave words like 'I' lowercase. Just wondering.

Anyways it was a good drop. I like the concept of it. I thought the rhyming was good, although I've seen you rhyme at a much higher level. It got to the point though which I like. A lot of times something is written about a topic, but the topic is like an underlying issue instead of the focus. You focused on it pretty well. Good job man. I'd like to see a long piece, maybe a storytelling piece with this. 7.5/10

nah man it's not for showing multies or somethin ,, it just for changin style or writing in different approach , actually i dunno i just come up with it ... nd thanks man for checkin it out much appreciated james . you will get what you like .. your orders are to be done .. anyway glad you liked it man .. i wanna see write a whole song as you did before .. so commin dont be lazy i want to see you around here ..

[Slim Zaddy]

Pretty good. Rhymes well and the concept is pretty cool.

thanks man ,, much appreciated ..

[Arabian Shady]

yo i like this 1 man, short and sweet but it had a different style, like you broke midway and contibued that at the next bar all the while keepin a story goin, pretty sick
Peace

[Slim Zaddy]

yo i like this 1 man, short and sweet but it had a different style, like you broke midway and contibued that at the next bar all the while keepin a story goin, pretty sick
Peace

thanks for checkn out Arabian Shady , glad you liked it bro ..

[neb121]

nice job

[Slim Zaddy]

nice job

thanks for checkn it up , much appreciated

[Rain Matrix]

I liked it you had some real nice rhymes there

[Slim Zaddy]

I liked it you had some real nice rhymes there

thanks man for checkin it out .