just a little verse...

[Rain Matrix]

not sure what to think of this... it wasn't bad tho

[Solace]

Pretty much this was the good part:

set the date, i'll meet you then, please don't act irrational!
i'll detonate, if you see me.. together we can match the flow!
come along, walk with me, together we can spark a light!
another song, talk to me, and try not to start a fight!
we can make it, if you try, to erase your constant lies!

the rest was just fail, yet turned me on at the same time

[mist15806]

my god are you screaming at the poor girl? LOL jk, it looks like you were more focused on rhyming, but what you put in for rhyming took out the.....sense? like it made sense in a way but it seemed like everything was everywhere. like "please don't fake it, stop the lies, come on face it, i want you twice"

[Slim Zaddy]

it was'nt bad

[James R.]

I'm feelin it man

[Slim Zaddy]

it was'nt bad

thanks man *looks at ur picture* finally know what u look like now lol,

hahahahahah ..