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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Dec 5th, '05, 03:14

Em_Young wrote:You just need me to get your ass in Brooklyn puta, dont you?

Let's start with the no1 fact:

You're in New York. And you rep a fag from Compton? As if your own fucking city never gave u music. You dont like G-Unit fine. But spitting on a New York rapper and worship a West Coast bitch is more than irritating cabron.

Second thing is....

Who the fuck you think you are, dissing 50 on wax. Who are you? Who knows about you? Are you Jigga? Nas? Wu? Cypress? Mobb? Snoop? If you aint one of them you cant diss 50. 50 will always be 50. The well known 50. The rapper 50. The actor 50, the businessman 50, the playboy 50 the whatever 50. Same with all the rappers i mentioned before. They are people with real lives and real game and they reached the top and now they enjoy what they achieved.

You on the other hand, you're a zero. You are an unknown person, between millions of unknown people. You was born unknown, you live unknown and you gon die uknown and i doubt that your mom's gon cry. That's what you are. You are nuffin. Not even a big nuffin. Not even important-unimportant. You're the person next door. Similar to everyone else out there and no one recognises you except your family. It's how life is.

So besides the fact that u making disses towards 50 is more than waste of time, besides the fact you killing this art we call "music", besides all this shit....lemme ask you.

Why the fuck you even bother living? Kill yourself, spare those FEW to NONE people who know you from this "Chinese B-Movie"-like nightmare that's known in this forum as....V-DogDaMenace.


damn nigga, i guess u love me to write a whole book bout me, lol
and what the fuck are you? u aint shit nigga, so dont talk, i just dissed 50 for the fuck of it nigga, fuckin faggot, u suck more dick than paris hilton nigga
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Postby j_shady » Dec 5th, '05, 03:55

ok, now you 2 need to stop w/ this shit..keep all personal shit in the pm's, its like you two are doin anything to get into arguments..

both of you are on some kiddie shit and no one gives a shit anymore
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I ain't mention yo name thats what all this bout"
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Postby Nu Syd » Dec 5th, '05, 14:49

it was alright,work on your flow

~ Stay up ~


u suck more dick than paris hilton


Paris is a freak lol,shes ass ugly though,id still hit it o_o
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 6th, '05, 20:41

Yo, this shows you who got quality and who is shit.

I said all this for him, i exposed him he has nuffin to say so what he doing? He dissing me. Wow..i am all impressed. So the answer to all this was the "you suck more dick than Paris Hilton"? You're a fad. Poor V-Rat has nuffin to say to me.

Btw, Paris is a lesbian :p :p :p :p
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Postby SoniK » Dec 6th, '05, 21:31

V-Bitch the Menace, u in my wrath now, andi doubt u escape/
its like being in Iraq and leaving un scathed/
its like bein in the towers, when the plane hit and blew up/
u lyk Icarus, i cut off ur wings, now u ent flew up/
u faker than silicone in titties of a aryan bitch/
and im a put u on death row, like im Maryan bitch/
and i doubt u even no who Maryon is, infact u fukerz dont evn hu carryin this shit/
real recognise real, and they also close to spot a false/ identified in my eye, u a muthafukin hoax....

copyin and pastin rhymes like u Microsoft components/
im a cool cat, and u fukers is a rodent/
and im get u spinnin lyk rims on a fukin Range Rover/
till u stop this bullshit, kiss my feet and its over...

put ya keyboard down....drop the mic....disconnect ur broadband...and read a mutha fukin book
R.i.p big proof

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Postby Coccoa » Dec 6th, '05, 21:33

Or you can just suicide V-Rat.
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Dec 7th, '05, 01:10

SoniK wrote:V-Bitch the Menace, u in my wrath now, andi doubt u escape/
its like being in Iraq and leaving un scathed/
its like bein in the towers, when the plane hit and blew up/
u lyk Icarus, i cut off ur wings, now u ent flew up/
u faker than silicone in titties of a aryan bitch/
and im a put u on death row, like im Maryan bitch/
and i doubt u even no who Maryon is, infact u fukerz dont evn hu carryin this shit/
real recognise real, and they also close to spot a false/ identified in my eye, u a muthafukin hoax....

copyin and pastin rhymes like u Microsoft components/
im a cool cat, and u fukers is a rodent/
and im get u spinnin lyk rims on a fukin Range Rover/
till u stop this bullshit, kiss my feet and its over...

put ya keyboard down....drop the mic....disconnect ur broadband...and read a mutha fukin book


lol

i caught this bitch FUCKIN-HIS-MOTHER , Ill RUPTURE-THIS-OTHER fagget, cuz we dont "quack, in bed" but ill have this bitch DUCKIN-FOR-COVER!//
He SUCKS-LIKE-HIS-BROTHER, with "bass speakers" kids couldnt SEE-THE-COMMOTION ,I'll Fuckin Kill Him An LEAVE-HIM-AT-OCEAN//
I'll ROAST-YA-WITH-GRILLS But At MOST-I-WILL-THRILL, Leave Ya TOASTED-AN-KILLED Cuz " Readin My Verses " Is The Only Way You Gon Get CLOSE-TO-MY-SKILLS//
When I BASH-YA-RAW I LASH-AT-YAW And Come Wit CRASHIN-SAWS Cuz I Aint Talkin About "Space" When I Leave Ya ASS-AT-NAUGHT(Astranaught)//
Wont Be HEALIN-SO-NEAT Leave Ya SQUEELIN-LIKE-GEEKS Then " Rip Ya Voice-Box Out " Like I Was STEALIN-YA-SPEECH
Leave No CEILING-TO-REACH//, Kid I'll MAME-AND-REAP-YOU Your LAME-AND-WEAK-DUDE //
leave you CRIPPLED-AND-BRUISED-QUICK jus read my LIPS, YOU-WILL-LOSE-KID! and dont deny it...you know i can RIP-YOU-IN-TWO-HITS!!!
SPLIT YOU IN TWO BITCH//
Sonik Dissin Me After I Diss 50 and Dont Responed To This EM-YOUNG, And Yo Sonik Dont Tell Me That Rap Was Your BEST-ONE
My Mac Will Leave Your CHEST-NUMB, My Lyrics Will Leave You STRESSED-SON// Im RIPPIN-WITH-MAGS-BITCH U Must Be TRIPPIN-TO-BAG-THIS
Cuz Shit, Ive Only Been Here For 5 And You Nearly 7 Months On TR And Ur Still SPITTIN-THE-WACKNESS//
I'll STAMP YOUR HEAD-FAKE! JAM-THE-LEAD-STRAIGHT and Ill Leave Your " Head Pumpin " Like CRAMPS-OF-HEAD-ACHE//
I FEED-ON-SCARED-KIDS Fuckin EAT-THE-BLARE-WITCH, Cuz the way i "rip ya lungs, Ur like a fish" U Wont BREATHE-THE-AIR-BITCH
I REAP-AN-TEAR-SCRIPTS,// i Spit GORE-AT-THIS-FREAK Leave him TORN-ON-THE-STREET Cuz , We aint on a "beach for 7 days" but im SHORE-THAT-UR-WEAK(Shore/Sure..Weak/Week)
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Postby Nu Syd » Dec 7th, '05, 03:22

whoa man,cruze hahaha,i dont wanna get involved but that shit was fiya

My Mac Will Leave Your CHEST-NUMB, My Lyrics Will Leave You STRESSED-SON// Im RIPPIN-WITH-MAGS-BITCH U Must Be TRIPPIN-TO-BAG-THIS


Now thats some rhymes
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Postby AspirinE » Dec 7th, '05, 04:01

V-DogDaMenace wrote:
SoniK wrote:V-Bitch the Menace, u in my wrath now, andi doubt u escape/
its like being in Iraq and leaving un scathed/
its like bein in the towers, when the plane hit and blew up/
u lyk Icarus, i cut off ur wings, now u ent flew up/
u faker than silicone in titties of a aryan bitch/
and im a put u on death row, like im Maryan bitch/
and i doubt u even no who Maryon is, infact u fukerz dont evn hu carryin this shit/
real recognise real, and they also close to spot a false/ identified in my eye, u a muthafukin hoax....

copyin and pastin rhymes like u Microsoft components/
im a cool cat, and u fukers is a rodent/
and im get u spinnin lyk rims on a fukin Range Rover/
till u stop this bullshit, kiss my feet and its over...

put ya keyboard down....drop the mic....disconnect ur broadband...and read a mutha fukin book


lol

i caught this bitch FUCKIN-HIS-MOTHER , Ill RUPTURE-THIS-OTHER fagget, cuz we dont "quack, in bed" but ill have this bitch DUCKIN-FOR-COVER!//
He SUCKS-LIKE-HIS-BROTHER, with "bass speakers" kids couldnt SEE-THE-COMMOTION ,I'll Fuckin Kill Him An LEAVE-HIM-AT-OCEAN//
I'll ROAST-YA-WITH-GRILLS But At MOST-I-WILL-THRILL, Leave Ya TOASTED-AN-KILLED Cuz " Readin My Verses " Is The Only Way You Gon Get CLOSE-TO-MY-SKILLS//
When I BASH-YA-RAW I LASH-AT-YAW And Come Wit CRASHIN-SAWS Cuz I Aint Talkin About "Space" When I Leave Ya ASS-AT-NAUGHT(Astranaught)//
Wont Be HEALIN-SO-NEAT Leave Ya SQUEELIN-LIKE-GEEKS Then " Rip Ya Voice-Box Out " Like I Was STEALIN-YA-SPEECH
Leave No CEILING-TO-REACH//, Kid I'll MAME-AND-REAP-YOU Your LAME-AND-WEAK-DUDE //
leave you CRIPPLED-AND-BRUISED-QUICK jus read my LIPS, YOU-WILL-LOSE-KID! and dont deny it...you know i can RIP-YOU-IN-TWO-HITS!!!
SPLIT YOU IN TWO BITCH//
Sonik Dissin Me After I Diss 50 and Dont Responed To This EM-YOUNG, And Yo Sonik Dont Tell Me That Rap Was Your BEST-ONE
My Mac Will Leave Your CHEST-NUMB, My Lyrics Will Leave You STRESSED-SON// Im RIPPIN-WITH-MAGS-BITCH U Must Be TRIPPIN-TO-BAG-THIS
Cuz Shit, Ive Only Been Here For 5 And You Nearly 7 Months On TR And Ur Still SPITTIN-THE-WACKNESS//
I'll STAMP YOUR HEAD-FAKE! JAM-THE-LEAD-STRAIGHT and Ill Leave Your " Head Pumpin " Like CRAMPS-OF-HEAD-ACHE//
I FEED-ON-SCARED-KIDS Fuckin EAT-THE-BLARE-WITCH, Cuz the way i "rip ya lungs, Ur like a fish" U Wont BREATHE-THE-AIR-BITCH
I REAP-AN-TEAR-SCRIPTS,// i Spit GORE-AT-THIS-FREAK Leave him TORN-ON-THE-STREET Cuz , We aint on a "beach for 7 days" but im SHORE-THAT-UR-WEAK(Shore/Sure..Weak/Week)




Once again, i searched his rhyme in google and i found a page with identical, unfortunately i cant access it though.



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Postby Nu Syd » Dec 7th, '05, 04:16

damn man,i gave props for nothing? lolz, but yeh,whoever wrote those rhymes * claps * , got tallent
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 7th, '05, 12:06

Lyric biter!!! Even if he is the SAME person, using the same lyrics over and over and changing the "name dropping" is just

LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAME
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Postby SoniK » Dec 7th, '05, 17:09

haha V Dog u pussy....

ur hearts pumpin numb blood, ur a fakester/
u a copier, and a paster...me im a maker
clap u like applauses and see if u lyk eatin lead
if u enjoy one in ur head, mor than u enjoy givin head
u a dick rider, u probablty try to pass Eminems track as ur own
and then u post whack ass rhymes, tryna get me off a throne
dont u understand, keep it simple...we dont want ur complicated words/
u fall back like canabus cuz even u cant contemplate them words/
and bringin my fukin mother and brutha into it was uncalled for/
shows u weak as fuck, just had to look for a weak spot/
well here i cum crushin ya, u tin can of sardines
u smokin weed
the effect on white boys, like Harold and Kumar get the munchies
and i seen shit that wud make ur heart get crunchy
coz im so real, and an immitator dancin to maroon 5
put ya in the pen and watch u get moon shined
and i'll finish u like Nas, and giv Ether to ya breathing
i get rid of heathens like yrself with simple healing
thou art not a real mc, u try to be clever and use long word
well im a get u at ur own game, and simply in one word
you a mistake, hypocritically judgemental and tryin to find ways to escape
from the very wratch of my soul, i got you fukd and enslaved
under a system, thought there was no justice, its a fuckin dictator ship
and im on that hot, boiling level and on the dick-hator shit
and i wouldnt be surprised to find u quivering, shiverin at ur expecatancy
wonderin what the fuck im gonna accept from thee?
anythin u throw at me, coz it all bullshit that u make up
jus waitin till i get thru u lyk bullets and wake up
and fakes up with that action get kicked in the head, in ya BURBS
and i do u lyk American History, wit yo Head on that CURB
and say put it on white boy, and then step down my foot on ya head
and serve tym cuz im raw and the devil haunts me in my bed
but nah im kiddin, i ent with that metaphorical bullshit lyk u
fuk it, toe to toe i fyt you
cuz im physically able to ignite you, emotionally able to flight you
and mentally clever enough to never be aside u
cuz im ona diffeent level, kinda like u need escalators or elevators
and u haters dyin cuz im jus escalating
and i aint hating, nor im jus pointin out u fuckin weak and copy
and Em Young knows it too, so stop robbing
others of their rhymes, we respresent, u jus influenced by our lifestyle
now Im a BEAT u TINA like it's IKE style////

haha now thas my style
R.i.p big proof

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Postby RI$KY REPPIN EN3 » Dec 7th, '05, 17:43

nice post
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 7th, '05, 21:12

I dont bother no more.
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