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Postby Inzanity » Nov 28th, '05, 23:26

Torben Wagner wrote:Damn you really touched me !! Very good text !! People raping little kids should get in prison their whole lives without anything !!! I could go out and just jump those guys ! this made me pissed off :boxing: I want those guys in front of me right now !!


Thanks u just made me smile. I was kinda sad I just watched the premier or Eminem's new video "When I'm Gone" on TRL and it made me cry.
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Postby SoniK » Dec 15th, '05, 22:54

yo i remember battlin u empty...lemme tell u....ur a fukin deep minded and soulful person who will have god watchin ur back for the rest of ur daiz and i promise things improve as when the sun rises over those livin in danger, the danger must melt away and remain only as bones of a broken past....we must not dwell on the past...what is dun is dun.....we cannot look to the future, hu noz what the good lord brings....but look to today...it's a gift...thats why they call it the present! I got Love for u

peace and upmost respect from ur British partner in rhyme

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Postby Inzanity » Dec 15th, '05, 22:59

SoniK wrote:yo i remember battlin u empty...lemme tell u....ur a fukin deep minded and soulful person who will have god watchin ur back for the rest of ur daiz and i promise things improve as when the sun rises over those livin in danger, the danger must melt away and remain only as bones of a broken past....we must not dwell on the past...what is dun is dun.....we cannot look to the future, hu noz what the good lord brings....but look to today...it's a gift...thats why they call it the present! I got Love for u

peace and upmost respect from ur British partner in rhyme

one luv x


Thank you Sonik that means alot to me. Much love to you partner. :'(
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Postby O.G.O.Y.A » Dec 16th, '05, 03:17

damn :'( i feel sad now and i really like it how it turned out in the end of the rap your on the straight and narrow i hope you do good
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