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Coleon - Acknowledge (3 Part Harmony)

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Re: Coleon - Acknowledge (3 Part Harmony)

Postby mcZu » Aug 6th, '09, 18:15

Nice concept. Flow seemed smooth, vocab was good and the punches in the second verse were not bad. I liked it, dude. Nice piece :b:
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Re: Coleon - Acknowledge (3 Part Harmony)

Postby D'Leh » Aug 6th, '09, 18:16

nice song dude!! :y: good flow, rhymes and structure!!!!! :b:
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Re: Coleon - Acknowledge (3 Part Harmony)

Postby JPearson » Aug 6th, '09, 18:49

Liked it all man... was interesting too coz of the different styles in it, great piece :y: :8)
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Re: Coleon - Acknowledge (3 Part Harmony)

Postby JPearson » Aug 6th, '09, 19:09

all gd man :y: erm well lately i just been writing about real life stuff... havent posted anything actually just realised... but not much, why?
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