Coleon - Syllable Swordsman

[Yah-hah]

WWWOOOOWWWW!!!!!!! Dude I love multis more than anything. I'm pretty sure I came a little when I read this. Sick schemes and everything bro. Nicely done. Incedible dude I've got nothing bad to say I love it

[DƎRDYPK]

alll I can say is WOW that was fucking crazy
im loving the multies & how you wrote this
my favorite part was

if you after the gift, expend disaster wit glyphs
stackin my chips
stash em' and split, then spend em after i dip
a bastard and prick
had ya convinced that i had swagger and shit
craftin my spit
a cracker rappin like great white rapids and sick
capture ya bitch
had her gaspin and slit after lappin my dick
collapsin ya clique

DAMN Cole I hope no ones sleeping on this drop
this is one of your best

[DƎRDYPK]

No i don't think you bit anything from him
but I can imagine him rapping this

[Steve Spag]

Yo, that's some pretty hot shit man! The structure was dope and the way it flowed was perfect the way I read it. You also had a very nice and wide vocab. with a lot of interesting words, so you get a plus for that!

Good stuff man, keep it up!

[Yah-hah]

Is Cole comin back?

[mcZu]

Nice, though the flow get's repetitive 'cause of the rhyme scheme.. good nontheless, but a changing rhymescheme would have been better imo.

[classthe_king]

Haha wow mad props for that.

[Solace]

Gay I wanted to read it you bastard I only got the part DerdyPK showed. But dope shit from what I read.

[Spyder]

yea man it fucked up

but what from PK quoted looked promosing