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September 11th

Postby Ivy » Jan 21st, '06, 02:04

Homicides, suicides, all caused by the Northwest Kamikaze//
African Americans, Caucasions, Hispanics, Germans, even swazis//
Unexpected~glass~shattering~horrific~deaf~screaming~explosion//
20 tons of 330 corpes hurtling, grinding screech enough to cause erosion//
231 degrees and rising, smoke billowing, flaring glow of conflagration//
Alarms sound, bodies lade out to burn, thousands fleeing out of realization//
Unforeseen~desperation~trampling~stampeding~victims into the bloody staircases//
Few tumbling our from the collasping towers as seen on CNN, as millions view unable to breathe and embrace//
Schools evacuating, bases fly into DELTA, jobs closing, tears many tears are now being shed//
Those very few who run out of the skybuilders running in different dirctions, as long as its ahead//
The Nations Capitol are cancelling all flights, but one remains but not for long//
Though made of steel, metal, and bullet proof, security tight, the Pentagon could not remain strong//
Some citizens were still unaware of the traggic events that were a phenomenon//
Hurling screams for a radius unknown, terrorists celebrating as they think they won//
Days went by, streets remained full, search parties dug in the remaining ashes but for what//
The Military fighters began to suit up, but no one cheered them on the doors then still remained shut//
Thousands were sent to Iraq, many fighting for lost family, others for revenge//
Bullets remain stabing and the casulty rates still increase, but the war was over 3 years after avenge//
4 years later architects have found and decided on a plan to build new Twin Towers//
Sayin' theres more safety percautions~emergency exits~we'll use stronger steel//
The new Towers will not be destroyed like a tooth pick, we won't feel fear, this Country is ours//
Many are devistated with the decision made by U.S. officials but yet patrisom is seen//
Millions of individuals cry throughout the 5 years gone by, but flags and respect still fly high//
There's something many have fought for many of times, but now we open our eyes//
And realize the United States stands for freedom and we were living a lie//
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Postby Inzanity » Jan 21st, '06, 02:52

wow dats some deep shit. I like it. nice work
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Postby Ivy » Jan 21st, '06, 03:02

Thanks, took me a while to write, but hey, I done my best.
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby the_cat_in_the_hat » Jan 21st, '06, 21:13

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