SliK - Violently Ill

[SliK]

Just something I wrote real quick. ThundaKat and royalthugz are 2 guys from a different forum. Not really important though. Let me know what you think - this is my first written.


I'm Violently Ill so I'll Silently kill
your microphone skill without telling you what for/
get me a doctor, barracade the locked door/
i need to be stopped or you're gonna get stomped on/
flow cold when I rap, it's a fact, I freeze venues/
lyrics so phat, that they fap, to pizza menues/
ThundaKat, just sit back, royalthugz will end you/
but relax, you aint wack, hope I don't offend you/
on some real shit though, your words are tight/
never know which flow you bring to the mic/
either a wick slow burning to a stick of dynamite/
or a skitso screamin "i ain't tryin'a bite!"/
This shit I write like woolworths express/
from pen to pad in 7 minutes or less/
so don't expect my best, let me stress my next point/
when i roll this next joint/ i'm gonna make a mess/
like at a party, drinking less than you'd expect/
but smoking lots of cess, searchin for some sex/
see a pretty bitch who only looks half dressed/
walk up to her, just to woo her, compliment her new hair/
like "you there, cute as pooh bear, come party with me new years"/
take her back to my place, burst in the door,
shirts on the floor, more heat than the first world war/
back when napalm was used, stay calm, not confused/
there's no harm in abuse, but she's hardly amused/
talkin of which; i've been stalkin a bitch/
firing voodoo curses like a witch doctors uzi/
exiling you to hearses like a hitchcock movie/
defiling all your verses like misquoting scripture/
a thousand words of mine are better than a picture

[shadyfreakzul]

very dope dude.

[SliK]

Thanks man, I can write more depending on the responses. I had a bit of fun writing that

[Edge]

nice especially for someone new

[SliK]

Thanks mate

[Edge]

that's actually great for a new member you should drop more man

collab with people here too and stay active battle bring friends and make a crew

do your thing niqqa

we need a thing to make official groups

[SliK]

Thanks for the words of encouragement

I might drop something a little more serious if I can get in the right mind frame this week.

Peace