Geno - Women (Fiasco Day 2)

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Damn, the first thing I noticed was the flow was perfect throughout the whole piece, Idk if you do or not but you should really record your shit your definitely skilled enough! I loved all the rhyming dude, its cool how you rhyme a part of the beginning of a line with a part of the beginning of another line if that makes sense theres just rhyming everywhere which is awesome!! I liked this piece a lot!! Keep it up.

[ShadysDisciple]

Damn, the first thing I noticed was the flow was perfect throughout the whole piece, Idk if you do or not but you should really record your shit your definitely skilled enough! I loved all the rhyming dude, its cool how you rhyme a part of the beginning of a line with a part of the beginning of another line if that makes sense theres just rhyming everywhere which is awesome!! I liked this piece a lot!! Keep it up.

Yeah man, you and Menzo should get to recording some of your Ego pieces.

On topic: Nice piece, I really liked the way the bars flowed, and the rhymes were dope.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Bangin' blondes and fuckin' brune's, jackin' off to such a view,
Had he thought of lovin' you he'd smack your jaw the colour blue,

Oh snap dude I didnt even recognize that one the first time I read it haha I'm glad you pointed that out!! thats dope AF. I love shit like that. Any ways, awesome man.

[CrashBand]

Obviously props on your rhyming here, very commendable.

I'm not a huge fan of the structure where you end a line half way through a sentence. It's kinda what em does a lot nowadays.

You've got flow down. You've got rhyming down. Your verses are pretty consistent.
"Had he thought of lovin' you he'd smack your jaw the colour blue" -that was a fucking dope dope line

and yeah as t-rex said bit of a wayne punch there

[Words]

The flow was flawless here Geno, and like with most of your pieces, your lyrics did not fall short by any means. I really liked this piece, flowed really nicely, can't stress that point enough. I had no trouble reading this, I could tell exactly how it was supposed to be read just by the way that the piece flowed together.

I've recorded on my phone and stuff (don't have a mic) but it's not the best quality, and I don't know how to mix it with beats or anything lol. I'll do it eventually.

Sorry to hear that you don't have a mic to record with, your Ego pieces would be awesome if you could find a way to record those.

[CrashBand]

Wayne punch? I guess it is lol. I was just messing around with it, thought it'd set me up to the next scheme well , and he says "Ho ho ho" so whatever haha.

awwww is that what you meant by it

[Slim Fiasco]

Again man, you impress me with the rhyming and the flow. It just look so stylistic, haha. You have some nice vocabulary as well, awesome work!

[Mr.DGAF]

The first bars were my favorite. Plus I love the word "spelunking". This was good, you probably already figured that out. Can't say much, good drop.

[SG.]

That Santa line was pretty meh, but overall, this was a great piece. The rhyming is excellent as everyone else has already said. Good job, Geno.

[Emadyville]

Overall wasnt feelin this one too much, the flow seemed off at parts syllable wise, and the content just wasnt for me on this one.

[Arabian Shady]

SICK flow, found and rode the beat the first time i read it. I digg the rhymes too.
You use your multies well Geno, although ive never cared for them haha.
Good stuff brotha (Y)