Conceptual Healing

[Just Silver]

Feed- CrashBands Quick Verse *please copy n paste

They tell me i am aimless i dont use concepts
Talk a bunch of nonsense,sayin i aint famous, but I got it
Even with no red name everything is said the same
Its just a matter of fame to climb that ladder to TR
Rhyming patterns are painted from a weed jar
Your tainted but we aren't, were brighter
Than highlighters.. "Hi Spyder" You might've
Heard of the crooks that are shook that wanna bite us
As i write just sit in a trance written with what looks like mechanical hands
They arent standing a chance or understanding my chemical manual plans
Of the Chemistry you will never get the best of me
Lyrical weaponry sharp as Hannibal Lecter be
So select your piece equipped tips get to steppin G'

Fuckers quick spittle

[Strictt Ame]

Not feelin this one as much as the other one I read..first off, its 13 lines so it ended awkwardly to me, and I think the flow fell off for 2 bars with the mechanical hands/manual plans shit..dont get me twisted, it was straight..just callin it like I see it

[Just Silver]

Not feelin this one as much as the other one I read..first off, its 13 lines so it ended awkwardly to me, and I think the flow fell off for 2 bars with the mechanical hands/manual plans shit..dont get me twisted, it was straight..just callin it like I see it

thanks guy for me i was tryin to have the concept of people sayin i dont have any lol

tried to mess with flows this was just a quick keystyle compared to other stuff

[Strictt Ame]

I feel you..and I think you got that concept across..just from a lyrical/flow/scheme stand point, I think this couldve been alot better..and if you keyed it then cool, based on that..your writtens are a mile better than your keys..Ill peep this elixir drop and see whats up

[Just Silver]

I feel you..and I think you got that concept across..just from a lyrical/flow/scheme stand point, I think this couldve been alot better..and if you keyed it then cool, based on that..your writtens are a mile better than your keys..Ill peep this elixir drop and see whats up

sounds good

yea its weird i write better non sober lol go figure

[Strictt Ame]

Thats common lol..look at any musician, not just rapper..but musician..they all usually do their best work when their loaded up lol..shit I do it myself, I dont write sober anymore..my content and concepts take a step back when im sober

[Just Silver]

Very true lol

[Just Silver]

:-k

better than negative feed lol

[Just Silver]

What the hell is a quick spittle

lmao just a keystyle

and thats why its so short im in the middle of another piece and u should check out "Tramadol" lol its on a series of writtens i do under the influence of different drugs

[Just Silver]

Sounds healthy.

A lot more healthy than this "healing" was.

is that good damn lol im lost

[Just Silver]

i shall see...