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Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Mar 16th, '13, 19:25

Just Silver LoF
Painkiller LoF

Painkiller/CP
Just Silver

Some Desperadoes bout to hit their first and only heist
Got these people at the bank panicking like "Holy Christ!"
Making sure no one waddles out, waving these guns around
Not pleased with the money they had, their funds are down
But they had a bit of faith, as they go and hit the safe
On their way out security began to aim as he lit and strafed
Pain hears the cops so he grabs CP, tell's him "we aught to flee"
They stole enough money, hell they practically hit the lottery
As they sought to leave cops everywhere blocking some streets
CP cocking his heat ready to shoot, Pain swerving mocking police
But their car moving slowly it's dead, CP starts unloading some lead
So they abandon it, moved solely in dread to big house lonely ahead
Without a squad car in sight, we thought their time running was done
Then saw a broad scarred from seeing 2 crooks with guns in hand stunned
With a phone ready to dial out, so he jumps on her trying to stop her
She stood by the door blocking the exit only hope is prying so
"Pop her"
Dropped her, and she aching quick lets make a break for it
Gets up and pulls a knife, Pain grabbed her and got her hit
"It's either money or your life, fuck it you mean less to me"
Stabbed her with her fuckin' knife, and stole her green SUV
On the road again dodging cops, found a place they stood the other night
Nonchalant on the run, they took a right and then 2 lefts and another right
Soon enough they were out of sight, and nowhere to be found
They were gone for good not a peep from them nor a sound
Rumors that the Desperadoes had died but it is all a lie
Those two crazy motherfuckers are still alive



We may have freedom, but shit aint free
In this life that we live we need currency
Its hard to believe , between you and me
We scheme and we dream till the R.I.P


I just received your call, CP and yall,in trouble
My side of town gunning,cops around they know nothing
Ill be there in a bit , as quick as a skip from CD skits
"CP quick get into the whip" and "PK come too"
My sedans plum bruise color with a sunroof
Stacks in the back with the sack of cash Killer just brought through
Squad blue,squadron squad cars, parkin,trying to make a margin
Line where we cant drive, "Fuck that", time to powerslide
Wiped out half, the crime stoppers, the rides not stopping
Finding where the boats are stocking up near the docks n stuff
We arrived quickly , "CP go hide in these" pointed to a crate
And "Pain dont be late", do the same,wait, meanwhile im pacin'
Cold bullet casings, contemplative, earnings from bank schemes
They gonna reach a verdict, after the chasing, 3 years past 18
Ok enough thinking "Oh shit" the ships sinking, and sirens blinking
"Time to get sprinting" "Pains" winning in "front" already like a bad stroke
Have hope CP we can take the backroads, see we need gas though
Same damn cops and our ass close, fast sprinting "fuck"
Lets get to splitting up, PK is fast as fuck , CPs known to hide
Im known for shoulder side,secondary every fire fight
Weaponry to survive the night were almost at the guided light
Police hating that were not at police stations
They keep chasin, were at the border where we almost made it
Made a million, make a name for civilians while chilling were famous



We may have freedom, but shit aint free
In this life that we live we need currency
Its hard to believe , between you and me
We scheme and we dream till the R.I.P
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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby Just Silver » Mar 16th, '13, 19:30

i messed up wit "CPs known to hide" but otherwise i got good imagery from our piece
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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Mar 16th, '13, 19:37

Fix'd. Great verse man, you did great, good rhyming, good flow and the imagery was great man. Overall dope collab. Hope we can work again sometime in the future.
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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby Just Silver » Mar 17th, '13, 22:17

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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby Evil Twin » Mar 20th, '13, 16:13

Thought this was great....great rhyming and the imagery was real good.

Solid piece overall :y:
Last edited by Evil Twin on Mar 20th, '13, 19:46, edited 1 time in total.
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We're gonna rock this house until we knock it down
So turn the volume loud, cause it's mayhem 'til the a.m.
So baby make just like K-Fed and let yourself go, let yourself go
Say fuck it before we kick the bucket
Life's too short to not go for broke

Go Berzerk!
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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby Just Silver » Mar 20th, '13, 16:24

thanks guy
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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby Just Silver » Apr 13th, '13, 14:44

Last bump i really like this piece
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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » May 6th, '13, 18:26

It felt hard to read,i couldnt quite catch on,i found myself replacing your words with mine..........
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby PAINKILLƎR » May 6th, '13, 18:36

Lmao I think I posted the wrong verse.
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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby Just Silver » May 6th, '13, 19:04

In what way lol its a topical and wrong verse this whole time lmao
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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby PAINKILLƎR » May 6th, '13, 19:33

I mean I had a revised verse incorporating you in it.
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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby Just Silver » May 6th, '13, 19:42

Isee lol and yea its a bit hard to understand first read my verse at least
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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby Halftongue Dre » May 6th, '13, 20:28

Silver the killer
I think your just in pain
Consider me a guerilla
Cause thats just how i like to play
More ill than a thriller
I'll litter your brains
Feel this pillar squash you
And scatter your remains
Peal you
Pop you
Swagger n sway
As i bob n weave
You cant hit my face..
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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby Just Silver » May 6th, '13, 20:29

Keep it in the multi section or something lol
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Re: Just silver & Painkiller - Illegal Freedom

Postby Francesco » May 8th, '13, 23:57

Good collabo... :y:
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