Ummmmm just wrote this yesturday......... :)

by **stevethetruth** » Aug 15th, '06, 21:28

this goes to the i'm back beat ummm
any kind of feed back would be awesome
i'm not sure if this is gonna become in to a song

You know you know you know who this is(repeat 4x)
That

by **Rae** » Aug 15th, '06, 21:36

damn steve ... i love that one ... i want u 2 make it in2 a song!!! :worship:

wow i really really like that one! i love readin ur stuff!

by **stevethetruth** » Aug 15th, '06, 21:37

cool thanks i was most likely gonna put this into a song anyway lol

i just need to come up with a chorus

thanks for the feedbacck!!!!!

by **Coccoa** » Aug 15th, '06, 21:38

The fuck is it? Can u write a conclusion of it in 2-3 lines?

by **stevethetruth** » Aug 15th, '06, 21:41

Coccoa wrote:The fuck is it? Can u write a conclusion of it in 2-3 lines?

what do you mean by that??

by **Coccoa** » Aug 15th, '06, 21:42

steverocks88 wrote:
Coccoa wrote:The fuck is it? Can u write a conclusion of it in 2-3 lines?

what do you mean by that??

I dont understand what u tryina say on this song so i want u to tell me what it is about.

by **stevethetruth** » Aug 15th, '06, 21:43

idk it's just a random thing i started to write it's nothing special

by **Coccoa** » Aug 15th, '06, 21:44

THATS THE POINT KID!!! When you write sumthin, it gotta be special. You aint going nowhere with sumthin not special. You ruining your career.

by **stevethetruth** » Aug 15th, '06, 21:45

damn dude i was bored so i wrote this hey it's better than nothing lol

by **Coccoa** » Aug 15th, '06, 21:49

NEVER BE FOCKING (Brit accent shit :smoking:

) BORED!!! Git it?????? Boredom = failure.

Damnn....i am bored :tounge2:

by **stevethetruth** » Aug 15th, '06, 21:51

well then your failing in life!!!!!!!!!!

by **Coccoa** » Aug 15th, '06, 21:54

I know

*click clack*

Bye bye world.

by **stevethetruth** » Aug 19th, '06, 02:31

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Aug 19th, '06, 02:51

nice work steve should defiantly make it into a song :d nice work

by **stevethetruth** » Aug 19th, '06, 02:52

Bar wrote:nice work steve should defiantly make it into a song :d nice work

thanks man i def will i just have to come up with one more verse and a chorus lol

Ummmmm just wrote this yesturday......... :)

Ummmmm just wrote this yesturday......... :)

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