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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 20th, '05, 01:16

Post Your Rhymes up in dis join ight? imma post myne a lil later cuz ryte
now i aint got da tyme, but i wanna see sum1 write a rap b4 i come back
ok? thanks! you can check back tommorrow for about 7-10 more raps of myne, and i will keep on postin at least 5 raps over here everyday so check
back over here everyday for new raps from ME or other MC's
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Postby eminemcaparica » Aug 20th, '05, 01:33

yo, this is for mi boy "V"
ye, that boi is a very cool emcee
there was a boy that didn't like tupac
but don't worry thugs, we kill him
c'mon man, he tought he was like slim
so, if didn't like tupac
is cus somebodi put his shit back
now i'm angry, i'm really mad,
that bitch prove that he is a fag

c'mon V, show the power of the real shadysoldiers
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Postby eminemcaparica » Aug 20th, '05, 01:36

iau V, i alwais wanted to go to NY, how is it?
c'mon after this, you need to tell me how is that place, damn i already dream with NY.
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Postby shadypelkey » Aug 20th, '05, 07:04

since were on the topic-of-talking
about these guys stealin womans jeans-for-walkin
when you see em' stop em'
knock-em' to the wall, lock-em' to the stall
do whatever it takes, cause I don't wanna see them roamin-the-halls
just wait...cause if I said it once then I'll say it again
these gino fags they-ain't-my-friend, cause I'd rather walk away
then asociate with these wannabe womans-n-gays
don't even say what I think your gonna say
cause I am not in any way shape or form tryin to be slim shade
just rememberin them good old days, laughing at the past-times
before I changed showin interest in cockin back n' shootin-nines
and tries blowing rage-n-rage he's tamed-arranged-for-days-n-days
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Postby Darjan333 » Aug 20th, '05, 10:56

I still dont like tupac,and you kill me,but i had a resurrection
you write some silly rhymes but they didnt have any affection
you are scared an run away in a creative section
but i am back for you and when you diss me it will come back with a reflection
damn,dude,you gotta bad connection,or a fuckin infection
cuz you cant make perfection!
Now look homie,i suggest you-STOP-or you will be sellin in a shoe shop
Fuck you pussy,you dont have balls to do this diss to the end
You are writing so stupid rhymes-i Can barely understand
that shit you wrote,friend,you cant even defend
i didnt say-quit it-it was just a recommend
V-you must be suspend for that shit-you dont have even money to spend!
cmon bitch,come back and diss me again
you are V-DogDaManace-What a fuck!?A new Bruce Wayne?!
And now-take a pen,get new brain,say amen and diss me again!!!!!!!!
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Postby yoshi » Aug 20th, '05, 12:05

eminemcaparica wrote:c'mon V, show the power of the real shadysoldiers


c'mon man, ur starting to talk like the real fanatic.. :shock: :shock: got some problems or what?.. chill out a little bit.. ;)
Maybe wrote:I'm so awesome, I don't mind looking desperate.

Chet wrote:Fuck House. If I wanted to watch a sarcastic person in the medical field, I would stalk Yoshi :8)
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Postby Vettori » Aug 20th, '05, 22:06

Now it's about you and me, and all these other mc's
tryin to fullfill there needs and poverty,Dreams,
We start off as little seeds,and grow up to wanna be,
One of are favorite rap artist It's becoming so clearly,
That when you chase whats not, really effection stop,
Your not, achieving what you came here you Bought what yu brought,
Changin lyrics, and Places, goin threw multiple phases,
It's like a video game tryin to run all tehse stages,
Quick turn the pages, look on page 132,
This hippocrytical shit thats written about you
i wont lie, Life has been altering behind are backs,
One day well civilize the whites and the blacks
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 21st, '05, 07:34

Get BEATING WIT KNIVES, plus i'm CRAZY WHEN PALMING SPLEENS!!-
Ya'll get DEFEATING WIT RHYMES, while i'm putting BLADES IN YA ARTERIES!!-
STABBING YA THROAT, ya'll get left with no VOCAL CHORDS TO SPIT SHIT!!-
I'm SAVAGE WIT QUOTES, Plus snatch ties ROPES TO WHORES, IT'S WICKED!!-
Ya'll know it's BLATANT I'M RAW, this FLOW WILL SEVER YA VULTURES!!-
I'll have generals 'RAPING YA FORS' like HOMOSEXUAL SOLDIERS!!-
I'm BLESSED WIT EXCELLENCE, Ya'll finished when REAPER'S DEPLOYED!!-
Ya squads TEXT'S IRRELEVENT, my clan will plan just to SEEK AND DESTROY!!-
Ya'll know i'll SEVER YA TEAM WIT TECHS, i'm RAW WIT FLOWS SO HATE IT!!-
It states ya'll BETTER THAN THREE PERCENT, I think YA'LL OVER RATED!!-
My squad of DEMONS IS WICKED, in fact we DARE YA'LL TO CONTEST!!-
We DEFEATING YA SHIT SCRIPTS prove ya'll can't BARE US OR THE TEXT!!-
Get put to REST BY BEASTS, we got a FLAWLESS REP SO MEAT THE TEAM!!-
It's pitiful that ya BEST EMCEE stands FOUR PERCENT OF BEATING ME!!-
Think ya UNLOADING MAGAZINES well ya VERSE AIN'T AN ISSUE!!-
We'll EXPLODE THIS WACKEST TEAM, and reaps'll let the MURDER CONTINUE!!-


DIS IZ A DISS TO EVERY MOTHAFUCKIN BODY DAT FUCKS WIT ME
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 21st, '05, 07:43

Lyrics Or Audio Noone FEARS-IT-THE-SAME Coz Your LYRICS-DONT-CHANGE And Whoever HEARS-IT-COMPLAINS, Even Your Boy Said It Sounds Like A 'QUEER-KID-IN-PAIN'/
You Couldnt WRENCH-EXE-FROM-HIS-PLIGHT Even Ya Punches Impact Like FEIGNED-IN-PLAY-FIGHTS The Only Time This Ass Feels Empowered Is What He GAINED-FROM-GAY-RIGHTS/
We Wont C Lite Like ALASKIN'S-IS, Strapped To BLAST-YOUR-KIN 'Till Dead, Then STASH-AND-WRAP Them In Plastic Bags And BLAST-AGAIN/
Knock Tha SIDE-OF-YA-WIG For TRYIN-TO-GET-'BIG' I'll Introduce You To That GUY-IN-YA-SIG!/
I Already Know This Dick's VERSE-IS-FULL Of Shitty PER-SON-ALS And CHEAP-SHOTS/
I'll SLAP-THIS-SUCKA For His LACK-OF-STRUCTURE...Serve Him Like 'ROCKSTEADY' And BE-BOP/
DARJAN A HIP-HOPPER? Then I'm A HIP-TOSSER, Suicide WRIST-CHOPPER, Show You How To SPIT-PROPER, A COPPER-STOPPER That'll Leave 'This Ass Missing' Longer Then JIM-HOFFA/
Better OUGHT-NOT-IGNORE-ME, How Can WHORE-REALLY-INSULT-ME? Like 'Laws Of Uk' Is FORCED-LIKE-YA-MULTIES/
Put Tha NINE-TO-YA-CHEEK, DIE-IF-YOU-SPEAK,You'll Never Be Able To CLIMB-TO-MY-PEEK Coz You Aint Designed With Tha RHYMES-TO-COMPETE/

FUCK U BITCH, U DONT NO ME
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 21st, '05, 07:46

This DUDES-INSANE Responding When He's Aware Of 'LOOSIN-HIS-FLAME' And Your Shits More Produced Then Ya 'USERNAME'/
DARJ, Dawg Your WRITTENS-REALLY-WEAKENED-G', Your Posts Per Day Happens To Be Ya 'PERCENTAGE-OF-BEATING-ME'/
Nox LEAD-ME-THA-RACHETTE So I Can Put LED-IN-THIS-FAGGOT, No Beef Son Coz I Just 'BURIED-THA-HATCHET'/
EAT-YOU-WITHIN With A PEN DEFEAT-YOU-AND-THEN CLEAVE-YOUR-CHIN OF-THE-GRIN/ So HAZ-BEEN, Take This Loss And Dont Get Out Your Fucking LEAGUE-AGAIN//
I SPIT-AGRESSION My Words A SMITH-AND-WESSON This PISTOLS-HEADIN At Your Weak Lines 'Lighter' Then Your SKIN-COMPLEXION/
I Guess It MAKES-YA-WONDER, BREAKS-YA-SLUMBER You Just "NEXT-IN-LINE" To Get Your TEXT-ALIGNED So I Recommend You TAKE-A-NUMBER/
Smashed With BOULDERS 'Till Ya SKULL-LEAKS And Your SHOULDERS ARE FOLD-ING, FUCK THE FBI, When I'm Done They'll 'SEND' This Guy To MULDER AND SKULLY/
You Betta GET-YA-RIFLE Before You STEP-TO-IDOLS Befor I 'BRING' Words Far Worse Then The DEATH-DISCIPLES/
With A HERD-OF-BICS, I'll SERVE-YA-CLIQUE... like MURDER-INK With GOTTI-AND-ASHANTI, Stop BANKIN Your FRANKLINS On WOBBLY-MONTY Coz This Ain't MONOPOLY-OR-YAHTZEE!//
GUILLO-TINE For This EAGER-FIEND...His Blood Covered Walls And RUINED-LINOLEUM, Let Me GREASE Up Your CREASE With PETROLEUM-JELLY For Being Faker Than CUBIX-CIRCONIUM//
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 21st, '05, 07:50

Ill SPRAY-ALL-MYSELF! Legend's Havin An IDENTITY-CRISIS That's An OBSCENITY,-RIGHT-MISS? Just So You Can PLAY-WITH-YOUSELF/
Dont AJUST-THE-TREBLE Another Casualty Dead In Debris Like Fred Flinstone All You Gonna SEE-IS-RUBBLE/
Like SADDAM-AT-ROME Legend LACKS-IN-FLAVOR And That WACK-BEHAVIOR Is Just Legend Gettin BOMBED-AT-HOME/
I'll beat HALF-YA-CREW Coz Everyones LAUGHIN-AT-YOU You's ASKIN-DUDES To Like You Coz My Rhymes By Far SURPASSIN-YOU*/
I Would Call You A PROS-TI-TUTE, But That Would NOT-BE-TRUE Coz You Just Have To Get COCK-FROM-YOU*/
Your Rec. Was GROWING-GRADUALLY, Now EXPLODING-RAPIDLY, DARJAN's Just Like The Lyrics He Steals...THA HOES-A-TRAGEDY!*/
When Ya Thru SPEAKIN-YA-SHIT Get DEFEATED-THEN-QUIT Coz Not Even All Your ALAIS BRING-HEAT-WITH-EACH-SPIT/
But Instead Of 'Swallowing' The Loss You Start EATIN-MORE-DICK Like "Error Messages" I'm BEATIN-YA-CLICK(Clique)/
Your Verses Are Fake So ABORT-VENTURES While I SCORCH-SCRIPTURES...You On 'Balls Nightly' Like "SPORTCENTER"/
You Cant STAY-ON-TOP When You DECAY-N-ROT At MC's HALL-OF-SHAME GOD-YOUR-LAME Like Eminems New SINGLE-DROP/ (not a diss to eminem)

Ya Know Who Im Getting At In Dis Shit
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 21st, '05, 07:51

haha imma post sum more shit 2morrow or later on ~1~ :D :) :D :) :D :) :D :) :D :D :) :D :) :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :) :) :) :) :) :D :) :D :) :D :) :D
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Holy fuck

Postby Vettori » Aug 21st, '05, 18:33

WOW V-dog, HOLY FUCK lolz,
Props on that wow,
Honestly, when i get a little bit better at battlin, I think ill face off against ya
as "friends" lolz, well when we battlin we be Against each otha, then after words, well fuck it wel lsee how it goes (gulp) hehe

"Faith"
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Aug 22nd, '05, 03:08

These POTENT SENTENCES SLAY THE BEST, I COMPOSE THE SICKEST WHEN MAKIN' TEXT, THE MOTIVED MISSION OF STATED DEATH, will "knock you into check" like JAHOVA WITNESSES PLAYIN' CHESS!!!
I'll ASSAULT YA CUZ YOUR CLAN'S ALL WEAK, The 'red' got this pussy uncomfortable, like when there's a FAULT AND THEN THE TAMPON LEAKS, cuz all he has is personals that are FALSER THAN YOUR GRANDPA'S TEETH!!!
I kill with the writtens, people like HE'S TEXTIN FATAL, But Sol's a pro at riding, yeah, D BESTS THE STABLE," We know you're not "dope," but i'll still give "P TESTS," I'M ABLE, to leave him in "a box" like 'Halo,' and really make "D.S." AN ANGEL!(D.S.- Diez)
Step outta line and i'll SET D STRAIGHT WITH THIS PERFECT SPITTIN,' So keep it up and turn this into a DEADLY DAY, IT IS SURE PRECISION, cuz you wish you had these 'sweet bars,' but can't touch em' like HEAVYWEIGHTS ON THE PERKIS SYSTEM!!!
Make cats levitate-when-I-spur-with-writtens, He'll be CAPSIZED WHEN THIS DUDE FALLS, CHASTISE HIM AND BRUISE SKULLS, And on the mic, you couldn't move a crowd if you SPAT LIVE IN A U-HAUL!!!
KuN's a true monarch who conquers THROUGH MISSIONS, GENGHIS? PLEASE, Witness KuN spit and YOU WITNESS GREATNESS SEE, Dia on the other hand, this DUDE'S WRITTEN GAME IS WEAK! No wonder we're not 'feeling Soljah,' we just like the TUITION PAYED FOR FREE!!!
Don't trip when the FIST IS AIMED AT YOUR WHIG, You'll get 'nun,' and I don't mean a SISTER PRAYING YOU BITCH, I see that you're wack, so I'll have this "pussy beat off the Bat," like Catwoman feeling frisky with MISTER WAYNE IN THE CRIB!!! It's OVER!

Sum Shit i juss made up, and its a diss 2 sum ppl i know KuN's a dude, and CS iz sum oda mothafucka and im dissin dem n dey crew tell me what ya thought bout it!
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Postby eminemcaparica » Aug 22nd, '05, 13:16

wtf? c'mon yoshi, i'm a fanatic yeee, chill? Me?
don't worried i'm not mad at yo, i gues that i over reacted, alright man[/quote]
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