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[Vettori]

Lies To Critisize

(Verse 1)

This is Just another figment of your imagination,
That's leaving behind this Overdrivin temtation,
What's the relation between, Whats Physical And whats not,
You got to step up to the plate, To show everyone what yu got,
Shake and bake wake and bake,
All the causes to leavin a mutha fuckin headache,
Just set it straight get your life back on to the track that it needs,
Sometimes the bite back, Is to hard for the hand that feeds.
But I dun care about any haters,
or cock fuckin wanksters and wannabe skaters,
any overruled laws cost legislatures,
Who just sit in there homes constant masturbaters
Just you hold on till later

(Chorus)

Theres always better days,Vision blurry,eyes are hazed,
Life is just a complicated rolling phase,in pain people dying in vein,
I just have to find out how to substain to the change
My life is Fuckin derranged

(Verse 2)

You should of stayed away from the sacred tree,
like adam and eve failed to succeed,
take a bite and it's straight up blasphemy,
Better run off to play hide and seek,
Before i sturr up this technique And smite thee
It's simple life isnt perfect,
Is everything worth it,
is fame all that shit does anyone deserve it,
I keep swurvin, this cieling,
it's instinct, im feeling,
the chills up my spine,
I'm Just on my own pleeding,
But one day ill be leaving, on my own Finaly
I will get The Respect If not My family
Can just rot in all peaces,They all die and deseased
I never wanted this wish Can They come back to me Please,

(Chorus)

Theres always better days,Vision blurry,eyes are hazed,
Life is just a complicated rolling phase,in pain people dying in vein,
I just have to find out how to substain to the change,
My life is Fuckin derranged

(Verse 3)

Obligations and rules, Sometimes ment to be abused,
It's like pickin between a pair of shoes,
either situation you win or you lose,
or your life you choose,
Don't let anyone tell you how too run shit if there shit aint right,
They just causin a break curcuit, and makin ur life,
a livin fight, is it right, suffering from the loss of darkness and light,
I'm talkin bout death, the simple gasp for last breathe,
that hold that you need to set your spirit up free,
How much do you believe.
Can you inceed to achive,
Responsibilty, only comes to the ones who can handle
It's like moby dick that idiot over the candle
So he burnt his shit, And regrets all of it, But he's learned his lesson,
Not to do it again, Curiosity killed the cat,
What says it wont Pearce threw,
You have to deal with life and it has to deal with you.

(Chorus)

Theres always better days,Vision blurry,eyes are hazed,
Life is just a complicated rolling phase,in pain people dying in vein,
I just have to find out how to substain to the change
My life is Fuckin derranged

(Outro)

Lifes full of surprises, But what can you do?


"Faith"

[V-DogDaMenace]

dat was sum ill shit my dude, check my battle againts sum dude, i dunno
who/or what his name is, but i got 2 battles check dem out ight? ~1~

[Vettori]

Thanx vdog, ima check yurs right now
That makes me feel good

[4D]

Big props on your rap Faith, it`s hot. Why did ya vote for V-dog before i even dropped my verse, that vote doesn`t count now Dawg!! :?

V-Dog, you`re battlin Fordie, don`t forget it. 8)

[Vettori]

Hey Fordie thanx man, Compliments appreciated
Srry about votin before ya did bro, Just i like Vdog's stuff ya no lolz, But yo ill wait next time

"Faith"

[4D]

Hey Fordie thanx man, Compliments appreciated
Srry about votin before ya did bro, Just i like Vdog's stuff ya no lolz, But yo ill wait next time

"Faith"

Yeah, but whether ya like his shit or not, ya gotta be unbiased when ya vote!!

[Vettori]

No man, im not choosen over who i like more, just i didnt see urs so i was voting to say i liked his, I dunno man, I'm sorry tho bro it wont happen again, aight ?

"Faith"

[4D]

No man, im not choosen over who i like more, just i didnt see urs so i was voting to say i liked his, I dunno man, I'm sorry tho bro it wont happen again, aight ?

"Faith"

Fuckin better not

Lol, i`m only messin with ya. It`s just a lot fairer when everyone judges the verses technically and not who they are better friends with.

[Vettori]

Aight man i feel ya, it's aight, its ok to be mad cause i kinda fucked u over a lil, but yu no, mistakes honest, But yo, maybe when i get a lil better i wanna battle ya ? aight, I try to match ya, I wont promise any good shit, but i think i can handle myself man lolz,

Think about it dawg

"Faith"

[4D]

Aight man i feel ya, it's aight, its ok to be mad cause i kinda fucked u over a lil, but yu no, mistakes honest, But yo, maybe when i get a lil better i wanna battle ya ? aight, I try to match ya, I wont promise any good shit, but i think i can handle myself man lolz,

Think about it dawg

"Faith"

Cool, when ya improve, lol.

[Vettori]

Aight thanx,
No hard feelins about earlier ?
when i did that voting stuff?

"Faith"

[4D]

none man, keep rhyming, ur good!!

[Vettori]

Aight much appreatiation, for da compliment,
One day ill be as big as 50 cent, or after, Ill at least make an attempt,
Cause i live at home strugglin to pay my rent,
And one day it will all make sense, Cause ill be on the stage pelasin parents
and kids ill be relentless, Some people can't touch this,
I'm sayin to much for my briefs to stay up and,
I'm only destined to get better, from here it's Just rising,
Ill be makin a shady records, surprising and making an enterprise
It's constant lyrical issues, I use in contents, Fillin his shoes,
Simply the qwestion stick's Will it be me or you ?
You don't no what i'm goin threw

That aint a diss, just a quick thing that came to mind,

"Faith"

[4D]

Very good man, nice freestyle!!

[V-DogDaMenace]

nice shit homie, keep dat shit up