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started a new song ( added second verse and half of 3rd)

Postby stevethetruth » Oct 16th, '06, 03:51

please leave feedback :D

fuck this no feed no song
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Postby DC4952 » Oct 16th, '06, 05:26

those are some good lyrics. I cant wait to hear the audio :)
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 16th, '06, 12:11

thanks man :D
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Postby Kojack » Oct 16th, '06, 13:41

le me guess

Thugz mansion beat

verse 1

that's right
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 16th, '06, 16:14

Kojack wrote:le me guess

Thugz mansion beat

verse 1

that's right



nope
i'ma keep it a surprise but it is a tupac beat
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 16th, '06, 16:15

G_killa wrote:the way i got it to flow in my head is dope but i think flow and delevery are gunna mean alot for the lyrics and rhyme placement to really stand out.


yep that is gonna be my biggest challege for this song lol

thanks for the feedback:D
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 16th, '06, 18:05

upping please leave some feedback
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 17th, '06, 14:58

upping once again
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 17th, '06, 20:19

????
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Postby Kojack » Oct 17th, '06, 20:52

the name of the track
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 18th, '06, 01:15

Kojack wrote:the name of the track


dude type a complete sentense i have no idea what your asking for
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Postby DC4952 » Oct 18th, '06, 03:38

steverocks88 wrote:
Kojack wrote:the name of the track


dude type a complete sentense i have no idea what your asking for


I think hes askin what the track is called :unsure:
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 18th, '06, 03:42

DC4952 wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
Kojack wrote:the name of the track


dude type a complete sentense i have no idea what your asking for


I think hes askin what the track is called :unsure:


well there's no name for it at the time lol
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 18th, '06, 04:18

yo upping added more to it
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 18th, '06, 17:21

come on people only one feedback and almost a hundred views...................
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