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Pull Ova - Make Out

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Pull Ova - Make Out

Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 02:09

(to tha beat "kick push")


[chorus:] 2x

pull ova - make out,
pull ova - make out,
cuz we got it like dat,
yeah - no dout!,


[verse 1]

i remember when i first came on that TR site,
at first i was like - yeah this bites,
so i posted some of my stuff,
to see if someone would dig it,
then you left a post about my song,
i kept readin your comment all nite long,
then we started talkin on AIM,
and it made me think, i really like him,

[chorus]

[verse 2]

i was very surpised on how much we were alike,
and how we neva fight,
we talked about how you like basketball and i do too,
maybe when we meet we can play a little two on two,
but when i win dont start cryin like boo-hoo-hoo,
i like to think about the times when we would talk about nothin,
i like the way we can talk and i can always tell you the truth,
becuz you know i cant do that with my boyfriend,
so i wanna say thank you,

[chorus]

[verse 3]

i havent talked to you ina while,
but i can tell you one thing,
you always make me smile,
you've really made me fall for you hard,
at first when i said i love you,
i was just playin,
but then when you started to talk about hot girls i started haein,
so i guess i gotta tell you something that you should already know,
i love you for real this time,
and thank you for being my friend,
i still think about you all tha time,
thats no lie,
and when we meet and start drivin around,
we're gonna be sayin ...

[chorus] 2x


(i wrote this in english class ... so i know its not that great!) :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 24th, '06, 02:19

hahahah i love is ash glad your finally back

good job on this :D
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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 02:21

awww thanx ... :D
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Postby Bren08 » Oct 24th, '06, 03:47

aww I like it, it's short and sweet
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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 14:32

thanx :D

i didnt realize how much i miss postin my stuff on here! :D
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Postby rhiannon » Oct 24th, '06, 15:05

aww thats sweet...lol nice work :flower:
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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 15:17

thanx rhiannon :D
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Postby rhiannon » Oct 24th, '06, 15:41

its aiight...who's it bout? :shifty: lmao jus kiddin
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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 15:48

lmao! im not tellin! :D

unless he wants 2 tell ya ... ;)
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 24th, '06, 17:17

Rae wrote:lmao! im not tellin! :D

unless he wants 2 tell ya ... ;)


yeah rae who is it???
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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 17:18

hmmmmmmm ...

i guess i forgot ...


he must have not been that important! :laughing:
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 24th, '06, 17:19

Rae wrote:hmmmmmmm ...

i guess i forgot ...


he must have not been that important! :laughing:


well then i guess he or "she" forgot about you too
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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 17:21

steverocks88 wrote:
Rae wrote:hmmmmmmm ...

i guess i forgot ...


he must have not been that important! :laughing:


well then i guess he or "she" forgot about you too


i dout it ... b/c once u hook up wit me ...

you'll neva 4get it ... b/c its tha most fun u'll eva have ...
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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 17:23

well steve ... i dont think u should worry about it ... if the person isnt u ... right? :whistle:
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 24th, '06, 17:26

Rae wrote:well steve ... i dont think u should worry about it ... if the person isnt u ... right? :whistle:

nah your my friend i don't want you obbsessing over some asshole ya know
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