Needs To Change (2nd verse added now a fully completed song)

by **ThomasAguanis** » Dec 7th, '06, 05:39

this is arranged weird but I flow it differently..it's hard to explain but it fits the way I want it to on the beat I have for it.

Chorus:
The world

by 4D » Dec 7th, '06, 10:11

One word....Multilicious.

Some awesome rhyme combinations there mate, my only worry is that you do too many multies, well, not really a worry, cos you're so good at 'em, just don`t get too tied down by the same rhyming sounds, sometimes they can go on too long. I do it myself too, its hard to resist.

by **Kez** » Dec 7th, '06, 17:56

Loving the multis, as usual.
Aint got no feedback, you got it all right. So props.

by **ThomasAguanis** » Dec 9th, '06, 19:03

FORDIE wrote:One word....Multilicious.

Some awesome rhyme combinations there mate, my only worry is that you do too many multies, well, not really a worry, cos you're so good at 'em, just don`t get too tied down by the same rhyming sounds, sometimes they can go on too long. I do it myself too, its hard to resist.

thanks a lot FORDIE
*adds Multilicious to vocabulary*

Kez wrote:Loving the multis, as usual.
Aint got no feedback, you got it all right. So props.

Sarah wrote::worship: Fantastic work. The multies in that are amazing

Clarky wrote:Loving it bro.

Thanks a lot guys

G_killa wrote:read it eairlier but forgot to feed due to a phone call

nice cant wait for the audio

thanks killa...and audio should come before christmas

thanks again everyone
:worship:

by **Inzanity** » Dec 9th, '06, 23:18

dam thats some good shit :smoking:

I'm supprised at the lyrics there weren't any basic rhymes at all and the multis were awsome real nice job on this one hope there will be a verse 2 and 3 to it

by **stevethetruth** » Dec 10th, '06, 03:51

dude i don't know how the fuck you write all these multies man

great job dude i hope to hear that damn audio soon bro lol

by **C-Game** » Dec 10th, '06, 09:45

yea man nice multies
and other than that everythin was there
meanin flow
waitin for the audio
is this for the TR mixtape ??

by **ThomasAguanis** » Dec 10th, '06, 19:14

EmptyPromises wrote:dam thats some good shit I'm supprised at the lyrics there weren't any basic rhymes at all and the multis were awsome real nice job on this one hope there will be a verse 2 and 3 to it

thanks a lot. There will be a 2nd verse. I don't think I'll do a 3rd verse cause I want to get everything out in 2 verses.

steverocks88 wrote:dude i don't know how the fuck you write all these multies man

great job dude i hope to hear that damn audio soon bro lol

I umm welll umm well I don't know how I come up with some things either sometimes haha. and audio will drop before Christmas...or at least I'm planning it to. Thanks for the feed Steve.

cgame wrote:yea man nice multies
and other than that everythin was there
meanin flow
waitin for the audio
is this for the TR mixtape ??

thanks cgame
it's not for the tr tape . it's gonna be for my tape I think
:shocked:

by **C-Game** » Dec 10th, '06, 19:19

kool man
hey once ur done send me a wma aight
the whole forum knows my download speed

make sure its under 1.5 mb
then i can download it in 30 minutes
YIPEEEE

p.s hey TA bro tourney 2 is startin
register aight

by **ThomasAguanis** » Dec 10th, '06, 19:21

cgame wrote:kool man
hey once ur done send me a wma aight
the whole forum knows my download speed
make sure its under 1.5 mb
then i can download it in 30 minutes
YIPEEEE

p.s hey TA bro tourney 2 is startin
register aight

alright I'll make a low quality mp3 or something for you if you remind me to when I release it.
and I don't think I'm gonna be in the tournament :8)

by **ThomasAguanis** » Jan 20th, '07, 23:34

2nd verse added :sweating:

feedback anyone? :happy:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 20th, '07, 23:45

second verse is just genuis man :worship:

i wish i ate a dictionary when i was younger

*goes to find one* *tihinks* needs some salt

keep it up cant wait for the audio :worship:

by **Inches** » Jan 21st, '07, 01:12

FORDIE wrote:One word....Multilicious.

big propz on this one tom

by **ThomasAguanis** » Jan 21st, '07, 07:00

Bar wrote::worship: second verse is just genuis man i wish i ate a dictionary when i was younger *goes to find one* *tihinks* needs some salt

keep it up cant wait for the audio

thanks bar :8)

and I didn't eat a dictionary :laughing:

and thanks Inches

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 21st, '07, 07:02

ThomasAguanis wrote:
Bar wrote::worship: second verse is just genuis man i wish i ate a dictionary when i was younger *goes to find one* *tihinks* needs some salt

keep it up cant wait for the audio

thanks bar and I didn't eat a dictionary

and thanks Inches

are you sure :shifty:

Needs To Change (2nd verse added now a fully completed song)

Needs To Change (2nd verse added now a fully completed song)

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