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Im Sorry Mom

Postby Rae » Jan 16th, '07, 20:58

Im sorry
Im feel like im always doing something wrong
And I know your trying to be strong
To put up with what I do
So thank you
I know you think I am always up to something
But that wasn
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Postby C-Game » Jan 16th, '07, 21:07

awww sweet
cleanin out ma closet ( rae version )

lol
nice
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Postby Infliction » Jan 16th, '07, 21:10

really nice, touchin :( hope everythins aiight for you
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Postby Rae » Jan 16th, '07, 21:11

thanx u guys ...

ehh lets just say my mom isnt my biggest fan atm :'(

n e wayz ... thanx
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Postby lenaespiritodefogo » Jan 16th, '07, 21:14

those are really good lyrics, i'm sure your mum will become a big fan of you ;) nice job :D
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Postby Rae » Jan 16th, '07, 21:15

thanx ... i just wrote it in like 3 min. lol

yeah i hope so ... i just emailed it to her ... but i havent gotten a response yet
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Thx

Postby D_Block » Jan 16th, '07, 21:16

Thx
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Postby Rae » Jan 16th, '07, 21:17

wtf ... dont b doin that 2 get ur posts up ...

ima sure ur kblock ...
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Postby D_Block » Jan 16th, '07, 21:19

okaa :happy:
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Postby Rae » Jan 16th, '07, 21:21

okaa ... haha

i hate u already ... and u've havent even been here that long

go to hell stupid *ss spammer
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 16th, '07, 21:26

deep stuff rae hope everyhting works out
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Postby Rae » Jan 16th, '07, 21:29

thanx hunn :)
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Postby Flamez » Jan 16th, '07, 23:17

aww that was nice and deep...i hope the best for you :flower:
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Postby Rae » Jan 17th, '07, 00:35

thanx every1 ...

when she got home she started yelling at me and stuff. but we talked threw it and for now ... everything is great ... be both understand eachother and stuff ... so yeah :D she was disappointed in me b/c i started smoking ... so she was kinda pissed off/concerned about that ... but i desided to stop ... and stuff ... so yeah everything is great :D

thanx 4 tha feed every1 :)
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Jan 18th, '07, 03:38

That kinda does remind me of Cleanin Out My Closet lol. In fact when I read the title I was thinking it was gonna be like a remix or something.

The song sounds awesome, and it'd be cool to hear you actually singing it. If you ever need any music just ask me lol. Glad you worked things out with your mom, and congrats on quiting smoking.
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