Complexity Practice ( again ) and just practice lol

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Cerebal Assasian see am a lethal fasten
am castin a mass killing its past thrilling
bone chilling tone killing your own willing
am a uknown cyclone a pyscco you dont know
eliminating discriminiation but discriminate to eliminate
your late, no participation still blow the whole station
erupt the nation built on corupt foundation
my combination the destination of concentration
a flow it out, while your stuck in constipation,
im a imposter got no roster ma heart cold like a foster
a foster your style a swift smile n make you walk the green mile
am mean vile a teen trial not worthile but versatile


thats it for now ill probly work on this more later

feed please

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Was ok but dunno what your rappin about,just like ryhmin words in one long line.Not bad though u can see what your tryna do and im sure a lil more practice and work and ur be dope.Nice work.

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Was ok but dunno what your rappin about,just like ryhmin words in one long line.Not bad though u can see what your tryna do and im sure a lil more practice and work and ur be dope.Nice work.

read the heading its just working on my vocab/rythming/punches ya know it aint supposed to have meaning thx for checking it

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I think this is a big turning point for you man, done a good job, great vocab, some nice multies, and flowed like water man. You know I like this sick complex type of rhyming. Do listen to what So Real is saying though, cos if you can use those words and have them in context with what you're tryin' to say, it will blow people's minds twice as much. Good work man, keep it up!

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I think this is a big turning point for you man, done a good job, great vocab, some nice multies, and flowed like water man. You know I like this sick complex type of rhyming. Do listen to what So Real is saying though, cos if you can use those words and have them in context with what you're tryin' to say, it will blow people's minds twice as much. Good work man, keep it up!

thx alot thas what i do like do this and them remember the words then when i make a track i remember all the words and stuff thx for checking it

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thx alot thas what i do like do this and them remember the words then when i make a track i remember all the words and stuff thx for checking it

No problem man. Well you've definitely got one over on me then, cos I`m brutal at remembering lyrics, lol. I can write 'em, but recalling them is another thing altogether, I don`t go over them too much though, maybe if I was doin like 20 takes for an audio, I'd have them memorised by the end, must try that, lol.

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thx alot thas what i do like do this and them remember the words then when i make a track i remember all the words and stuff thx for checking it

No problem man. Well you've definitely got one over on me then, cos I`m brutal at remembering lyrics, lol. I can write 'em, but recalling them is another thing altogether, I don`t go over them too much though, maybe if I was doin like 20 takes for an audio, I'd have them memorised by the end, must try that, lol.

when writing a song i end up spitting the verses over the beat like 40 times before i get my final take...so i leanr pretty easyily lol but i still keep th ylrics there when recording just incase i go to stutter

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thx alot thas what i do like do this and them remember the words then when i make a track i remember all the words and stuff thx for checking it

No problem man. Well you've definitely got one over on me then, cos I`m brutal at remembering lyrics, lol. I can write 'em, but recalling them is another thing altogether, I don`t go over them too much though, maybe if I was doin like 20 takes for an audio, I'd have them memorised by the end, must try that, lol.

when writing a song i end up spitting the verses over the beat like 40 times before i get my final take...so i leanr pretty easyily lol but i still keep th ylrics there when recording just incase i go to stutter

Yeah, of course, that's how it should be done.

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by far ur best....
some kool rhymes and da way u started of Cerebral Assasin reminded me of somethin

nice stufff bar

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by far ur best....
some kool rhymes and da way u started of Cerebral Assasin reminded me of somethin

nice stufff bar

yeh reminds me of somehting aswell i think someone used it in a ryhme or something...might have been tom...idk

thx for checking

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by far ur best....
some kool rhymes and da way u started of Cerebral Assasin reminded me of somethin

nice stufff bar

yeh reminds me of somehting aswell i think someone used it in a ryhme or something...might have been tom...idk

thx for checking

wrong....
lol
anyway kool stuff bro

now i wanna see u use dem words on audio

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Yeah Cerebral Assassin is definitely out of something, it's a cool 2 word combination that a lot of people might have used.

I`m workin on rhyme now, and one part of a line is "I`m an assassin of assonance"

Assonance is the rhyming of vowel sounds, the kind of rhyming that Eminem and Rakim would be famed for.

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by far ur best....
some kool rhymes and da way u started of Cerebral Assasin reminded me of somethin

nice stufff bar

yeh reminds me of somehting aswell i think someone used it in a ryhme or something...might have been tom...idk

thx for checking

wrong....
lol
anyway kool stuff bro

now i wanna see u use dem words on audio

Triple HHH i think isnt that what he gets called the cerebal assasian or is it jean cluade van damme ( the actor ) ...its bugging me now were i got it from

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Nice stuff there . Got some great rhymes in it

thank you

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by far ur best....
some kool rhymes and da way u started of Cerebral Assasin reminded me of somethin

nice stufff bar

yeh reminds me of somehting aswell i think someone used it in a ryhme or something...might have been tom...idk

thx for checking

wrong....
lol
anyway kool stuff bro

now i wanna see u use dem words on audio

Triple HHH i think isnt that what he gets called the cerebal assasian or is it jean cluade van damme ( the actor ) ...its bugging me now were i got it from

HHH and it was used as an alias in a battle on LW