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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 13th, '05, 04:00

check what my WONDERFUL KEY'S DO, REBUTTALS DEFEAT FOOLS no one 'sees your sparks' like if BUBBA WAS SEE THROUGH!/
a THUNDEROUS BEAST WHO'LL-PUNCH THROUGH YOUR TEETH FOOL till you feel PUDDLES BENEATH YOU/
this DUDES A GENIUS, im hungry and your CREW'S CONVIENANT, we'll SHOOT OBSCENE SCRIPTS just to PROVE YOUR TEAM'S SHIT/
very FEW CAN SEE THIS, fake thug, closest you'll get to "throwin up signs" is chillin with MUTE BULEMICS!/
SPEW DISEASES, ive already SAID THAT YOU'RE GROUPIES, LEAD IF YOU FOOLS BEEF/
left DEAD IF YOUR CREW SPEAKS, i guess im wack now, couple weeks ago you faggots BEGGED TO RECRUIT ME!/
talking shit now? my crew HARDLY IS PHASED, CALL ME INSANE but no one reads ur verses, ya BARS ARE TOO PLAIN/
ya niggas is wack before you joined, theres no OBVIOUS CHANGE, leave herbs smoked, fuck it, ill roll MARLEY'S REMAINS/
Im so "sickening" that aids gets infected and NAUSEA FAINTS so dont even START TO COMPLAIN/
Wont stop until your CARCUSS IS DRAINED, wheres yer raps bitch? only 'tracks' you've layed are the MARKS IN YOUR VEINS!/
Cant SWING WITH THE BIG DOGS, heard your kinda nice but im THINKING THE SHIT'S FALSE, saw you in action, sorry to say in the RING YOU'RE A BIT SOFT/
bury you in L.A leave your covered in CRIMSON WHERE CRIPS WALK im SICK AND IM PISSED OFF/
This BASTARDS A KILLER, prolly thinkin your shits hot, its a FACT THAT IT'S FILLER/
with your boring ass text, guess what, i read your verses BACKWARDS, IT'S ILLER!/
This is business nigga, ill let you KNOW WHEN IT'S BEEF, needless to say you'll FOLD IN DEFEAT/
Fuckin snatch your bladder so the only time you "FLOW ON THE STREETS" when its impossible HOLDING YOUR PEE!/
POTENT WITH RAW SHOTS, openmic wants a good battle, i sure HOPE THAT YOUR BARS HOT/
niggas spoke 'brightly' of you, niggas left there THROAT IN A DARK SPOT, nigga's like "amazed kids at new years"....keeping his mouth OPEN WHEN BALLS DROP!/


GOD DAMN!!! V-DOG DOES IT AGIAN!!!!!! CHECK BACK HERE TOMORROW FOR NEW RAPS FROM THE 1 N ONLY! V-D-O-G!!!!!!!!!!!! IM OUTY!!!!!
SEE YA TOMORROW MORNING!!!!!! oh and tell me what u think bout dis rap, and all my oda 1's k? thanks! ~1~
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 13th, '05, 04:09

:shock: holy shit. you're crazy. don't you ever run out of lines?
It's a great verse like the other 2 you posted tonight.
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I still rap better than you.

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Postby Wendy » Sep 13th, '05, 05:13

Good one.
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Postby Darjan333 » Sep 13th, '05, 08:51

It is soo great.....
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Postby Sunni » Sep 13th, '05, 08:55

That was awsome. 10.
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 13th, '05, 13:11

watch me WRECK THIS EFFORTLESS, BLESSED WITH PENMANSHIP, your DEATH'S JUST EMMINENT, strategically DISSECT YOUR TEXT WITH SCRIPTS and pull INTESTINES, NECK AND RIBS through your INFESTED RECTUM BITCH!!!!!!!///

thats just a little warmup, anyone who wants it fall back and think about it for a minute........

its strictly INSANE WHEN I LAUNCH SCRIPTS, CAME IN TO BOMB PRICKS, leave all VEINS IN YER ARMS RIPPED/
OBEY AND RESPOND BITCH!, your FACING A STRONG KID, TRAINED TO DISARM CLIQUES, your plans to STAY AND ACCOMPLISH are ridiculous...just like SAYING I LOST SHIIIT!/ never that
I'll leave fucking LAYERS OF CHARRED SKIN, LAY EM IN COFFINS, find a PRAYER IN PSALMS QUICK im SATANS ACCOMPLICE-BLAZING THE CHARTS WITH,STATEMENTS AND CONCEPTS- NEGATING YOUR NONSENSE/
I'm about to PROVE IM THE RAWEST, BRUISING YOUR SQUAD WITH, TOOLS IN MY PALMS GRIPPED, faggot DUDES ARE JUST TARGETS/
who you think yer FOOLING YOU'RE GARBAGE, my GOONS IN THE DARKNESS, ready to empty a FEW IN YOUR CARTILIDGE-the slightest MOVE AND ITS ON BITCH!!/
PURSUE THIS WITH CAUTION, my names been CARVED IN THE GROUND,gone for a few months still GUARDING THE CROWN/ for real
you STARTED IT CLOWN...ill finish it, who gassed you dog? ripping your CONFIDENCE DOWN-SPARK YOU WIT ROUNDS/
not even FACING THE WRITTENS BITCH, Specialist's "diggin his own grave" its cool that yer TAKING INITIATIVE/
ill BREAK YOU WITH VISCIOUSNESS, I got this shit MASTERED IN TEXT BRO/
dont cross the PATH OF MY THRESHOLD, better GATHER YOUR BEST FLOW or SCATTER WHEN TECHS BLOW!/
Prob BATTLES AND WRECKS FOES...think you "stealing the W?" nah, i dont play SCRABBLE WITH CLEPTOS/lol
you aint DUCKING THESE 3 JABS, stupid FUCKERS GET BEAT BAD, niggaz wont see "next friday" like Chris TUCKER IN REHAB!/ damn
you dont want NOTHING WITH BEEF FAG, Checked your weak ass record, stupid im DENOUNCING YOUR SPOT/
dont mention the streets nigga, yer hoods like "Goaltending" doesnt really COUNT AS A BLOCK!/


NEW SHIT!!!!!!!
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 13th, '05, 17:35

well, im AIMING TO CEASE FAKES, REIGNING WITH EACH PHRASE to leave my name ENGRAVED IN YOUR TEAMS FACE/
the 'games over' WAIT FOR THE REPLAY, disgusting how HATEFUL MY SPEECH SPRAYS, so "mind your business" or find yer 'BRAIN IN A BRIEFCASE'!/
SUCKA YOUR LAME KID, apply pressure till yer knees BUCKLE AND BREAK QUICK, who you thinks the illest? V-Dog will prolly CUT THROUGH YOUR FAVORITE/
leaving competition in PUZZLED AMAZEMENT, so you cant 'hold your ground' but ill have you 'HUGGING THE PAVEMENT'!/
ur verses SUCK AND YOUR BASIC, I'm MORBID AND VIOLENT about to make SURE THAT YOU DIE BITCH/
since i FORMED THIS ALLIANCE i've been STORMING WITH TYRANTS, and if you think you can 'stomach this'....im 'PERFORMING THE HEIMLICH'/
think your nice when your SCORING OFF MY SHIT!...nigga ill BEAT YOU WITH HANDS to turn your TEETH INTO SAND/
you cant COMPETE WITH ME STAN, checked your style, you've been 'copying my answers to ur questions' like kids who 'CHEAT ON EXAMS'!/
appetite for destruction, you got the INGREDIENTS MASTERED, get BEATEN AND CLAPPED QUICK, crush yer TEETH AND DETACH RIBS!/
DELETING YOUR WACK SHIT, so keep my 'name out your mouth' till I tatoo V-Dog to my PENIS YOU FAGGOT!/
Look in my DIRECTION YOU'RE KILLED, you aint showing AGGRESSION YOU CHILL with WEAPONS CONCEALED/
i QUESTION YOUR SKILLS, so fuck a 'face lift' whyse....I'll have doctors 'Bench PRESSING' YOUR GRILL!!!/
bullets TEARING YOUR FLESH better choose an ALIAS NEXT V-Dog's SCARY WHEN VEXED!/
yer BARELY A THREAT, checked your battles, verses got more 'dead spots' than a CEMETARY FOR PETS!!/
shove my foot in your ass till dirt APPEARS ON YOUR BREATH try to DISGUISE YOUR FLAWS but cant match my SIZE AND FORCE these GUYS ARE RAW, 'clappin at kids' who DISPISE APPLAUSE!/
testing a RIVAL LORD, rip out your SPINAL CORD, tell your friends V-Dogs been 'cuttin through the net' like champions at the FINAL FOUR!!/
TORTURE AND RIDDLE YOU for THOUGHTS OF PRETENDING DUKE, left in a MORGUE, YOUR APPENDIX GLUED, body mangled on a CROSS FOR YER CLIQUE TO VIEW!!!!!/
Leave your CORPSE IN A RIVER FOOL, garbage, you only 'drop science' when the COURSE IS TOO DIFFICULT!!/


GOD DAMN, NIGGA!!!!!!!!!!!
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 13th, '05, 17:45

My MORBID EVIL SCRIPTS'LL-TORTURE FEEBLE KIDS, take this LOSS AND KEEP IT PRICK, yer going to WAR WITH JESUS BITCH!/
Leave your CORPSE DEPLETED WITH, spine shattered, brains lying ACROSS THE STREET AND SHIT so just "quit while you're a head" like 'ABORTED FETUSES'!/ eww
just APPLAUD AND EAT A DICK, bring it to me and ill SEVER YOUR FUCKING TEAM, left DEAD WITH A RUPTURED SPLEEN put your HEAD WHERE YOUR NUTS SHOULD BE/
Everyone knows you 'adopted' my style faggot! Shit you practically BEGGED ME FOR CUSTODY!/
verses PATHETIC AND SUCK TO ME, you cant compare...before i shove my FIST THROUGH YOUR RIBS NEXT, i got half the losses, plus TRIPLED YOUR WINS...CHECK!/
stupid to diss me, its SIMPLE IM THIS VEXED, because of 'poor aim', my MISSLES JUST MISSED 'X'/
get off your knees, release my DICK, TAKE A BIG BREATH, abandon-beef cause obviously you cant stand-to-V like CRIPPLES AT PISS TESTS!!!/
bullets RIP THROUGH THIS KIDS VEST, a SAVAGE WITH PENS, EMBARRASING MEN, caught you in talkin 2 niggas tryin to BRAG THAT YOU'D WIN/
yer cliques-AVERAGE AND SLIM, stop riding pussy ass nigga sage, we wouldnt want u to go through another miss-CARRIAGE AGAIN!/
i'll be HONEST AND CLEAR TO YOU, Catch 22's basically a bunch of kids who aint quite FLAWLESS MATERIAL/
BOMBING IMPERIAL, everything you WRITE IS CRAP KID, no chance with this TITAN BASTARD-TIGHT AND CLASSIC/
You've never wanted to INTICE THIS WRATH BITCH, for the last month you've 'ducked V-Dog' like paper ball FIGHTS IN CLASSES!!/ admit it nigga
My CLAN'LL BOMB HERBS, youve been fell off, no ones there to catch you like stage diving at Mc HAMMER CONCERTS!/
how you plan to HANDLE MONSTERS? everything i SERVE IS DISGUSTING, quit talking, yer already MURDERED! ENOUGH!, SHIT
You CERTAINLY SUCK KID, niggaz barely bragged, just invited you to chat to tell people how we WERE'NT TO BE FUCKED WITH!!/
yer POSTS LACK HOT SHIT, FLOWS WACK STOP IT!, spit at me, V'll do like Clyde Drexler jerseys and 'THROWBACK ROCKETS'!/
V-Dog's falling off? what, CONTROL THAT GOSSIP!, ill SMASH YER BEST POST, dont get raped dog, im 'in yer walls' till i CONTRACT ASBESTOS!/
what made you do it kiddo? yer GASSED JUST LET GO, play my cards right 'dealing-blows' my niggas 'steal-the-show' runnin with a CAST OF CLEPTOS!!/


GOD DAMN MOTHAFUCKA!! NO1 CAN HOLD ME NIGGA!!!!!!
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Postby DaILLesSt147 » Sep 13th, '05, 18:31

nice battle rhyme/rap 10/10
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Postby Sunni » Sep 13th, '05, 21:39

That's cool man. Are you still in Wendys group or label?
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 14th, '05, 00:36

fry wrote:That's cool man. Are you still in Wendys group or label?



im in her label, and im starting my own label
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 14th, '05, 00:39

check more raps out later on
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Postby Sunni » Sep 14th, '05, 01:17

What's your label called? And are you gonna sign anyone?
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 14th, '05, 02:44

fry wrote:What's your label called? And are you gonna sign anyone?



i dunno what my label is called but i am gon sign ppl if they wanna join up
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Postby Wendy » Sep 14th, '05, 08:27

You should sign me :)
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