some rhymes i wrote to a girl yesturday.

by **ThomasAguanis** » Sep 24th, '05, 05:34

here are the lines i wrote for her. i did it yesturday and she saw them today. she really like them

but i know they're not like i normally write so i guess if you read it leave your comments on it.it's all true and here it is:

someone picked me out from the class thought it was a joke/
last year I heard about a note/ now when I see her I choke don't know what to say/
maybe utter hey ummmm how was your day?/
but this is all I could come up with scared of what she would think./
maybe I like her I don

by **Sunni** » Sep 24th, '05, 05:40

It's a pretty decent song. Good work man.

by **Darjan333** » Sep 24th, '05, 07:50

Good verse,bro....
Continue with that!

by **HAYZI** » Sep 24th, '05, 13:38

nice man

by **eminemcaparica** » Sep 24th, '05, 14:42

did it work with her???

by **Tomega** » Sep 24th, '05, 14:47

yeah wanna know if this really happens? and how did it end?
make a song ! damn your lines or sometimes very touchy

by **ThomasAguanis** » Sep 24th, '05, 14:58

eminemcaparica wrote:did it work with her???

yea. she liked them a lot. she said she would go out with me but i havent asked her in person yet. i mean after she got this in a note she texted me and said she would go out with me anytime so i'm gonna ask her in about 3 hours when i go to the mall with her. i think it's beter to ask in person.

by **AspirinE** » Sep 24th, '05, 15:00

Call her thats the best way

by **eminemcaparica** » Sep 24th, '05, 15:03

ASPIRINE wrote:Call her thats the best way

no, in person is better, only pussys do it by the phone.

and bring her a single rose, good luck

by **HAYZI** » Sep 24th, '05, 15:03

ThomasAguanis wrote:
eminemcaparica wrote:did it work with her???

yea. she liked them a lot. she said she would go out with me but i havent asked her in person yet. i mean after she got this in a note she texted me and said she would go out with me anytime so i'm gonna ask her in about 3 hours when i go to the mall with her. i think it's beter to ask in person.

good luck dude have fun

by **ThomasAguanis** » Sep 24th, '05, 15:08

thanks guys for the luck

i'll say what happens when i get home later today.

by **Tomega** » Sep 24th, '05, 15:47

Good luck, man!
dont get shy, and be yourself!

by **ThomasAguanis** » Sep 25th, '05, 00:04

well i'm back now.
i didnt ask her out because her friend was with her the whole time and it didnt feel right asking her out in front of her friend but i have an idea of what i'm gonna do. :idea:

by **Sunni** » Sep 25th, '05, 00:35

Your neighbour wrote you a poem about your feet? Holy shit. You should move to another country.

by 4D » Oct 1st, '05, 17:02

eminemcaparica wrote:and bring her a single rose, good luck

:lol: Caparica the Stud himself, Rudolf Valentino.

Props on the rhyme Thomas, honest hearfelt rhyme man, glad she liked it. Coulda been very embarassing if she bust her ass laughin at ya, callin ya a faggit!! :twisted:

some rhymes i wrote to a girl yesturday.

some rhymes i wrote to a girl yesturday.

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