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Postby Enimee » Apr 6th, '07, 21:18

I used to give a fuck now i cud give a fuck less, im will smith and ur jus anotha doc loveless
so wait a sec while i take the tyme to bust this, like a nut on ur chicks but cuz ur ass isz jus plain lust-less

so what if im not even half committed, u drop hot lines on an eminem fan site so lemme fit this
boot to your foot i knew that u would talk hot like u hittin, why even try when 95 percent of all your rymes are half bitten

look at u mixin big wit pac and dre wit naz. me im doin more flips in trickz den dat and 1 kid named Hot Sauce
im turnin out ho'z m makin ma money well spent that means im poppin bra, u jus got fuckked frontin like u rept the block and got dropped off

this is the dream team if you mix E wit Me, enimee the best MC since the fall of jurmaine dupree
bitch i fuckin aim with ease BLAME THE KEEZ for MAKIN ME, a cold hearted wnna be G who stays blunted fo free

cuz when peope see me on the block that brickz on da house like that Commodores track, if luck wuz a lady then that lady'z stacked and thats a fact
so thats that snoop n kelly u know who it goes u otha wnna be's lack tact, so when ya show to ma show expect to be escorted to the back
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Postby JMG » Apr 6th, '07, 21:38

boring
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Postby Enimee » Apr 6th, '07, 21:48

yeah ok like u have ever done anything better in ur life....which will be shortened because tonight u will drown on ur own spittle while ur asleep.......u can drown in half an inch of water homboi




fuck ya dude....atleast post more shit dont waste my time to get more postz lol dat soundz so corny



but yeah one word comments? even ur better then that stop degrading yourself
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Postby JMG » Apr 6th, '07, 21:53

i dont care about post dude so stop sayin that shit if there was a way to delete them all i would but that was weak and boring im just tellin the truth
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Postby Enimee » Apr 6th, '07, 22:01

ok preciate the constructive criticism witch it wuznt but i acknowledge ur effort
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Postby JMG » Apr 6th, '07, 22:03

that wasnt constuctive critisism that was a stright diss to ur gargage flow
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Postby Enimee » Apr 6th, '07, 22:07

ooo real tough damn u got me i have no flow sheesh wut can i say i have been called out...maybe u jus dont understand the content numbnutz prolly a lil over ur head


my last 2 lines or so were trash but the rest wuz next to decent come on now
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 6th, '07, 22:35

I used to give a fuck now i cud give a fuck less

^^ reminds me of an eminem song lol ;)

nonetheless it was good...
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Postby JMG » Apr 6th, '07, 22:50

it is somethin eminem said
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Postby Enimee » Apr 6th, '07, 22:55

sure wuz dunno where from do yall cuz i aint hurd dat song in 4 eva
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 6th, '07, 22:58

http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/eminem/imback.html

it's from I'm Back...

not saying you copied or nothing i'm just saying it reminded of that song.
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Postby JMG » Apr 6th, '07, 23:01

hes bitein eminems line on a eminem fansite
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Postby Enimee » Apr 6th, '07, 23:01

welp i did use that part cuz wellp i wuz jus fuckin around but the rest wuz of
ma own creation
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Postby Rae » Apr 6th, '07, 23:43

that was good.
def. not your best.
but it wasnt bad either.
keep it up :happy:
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Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 7th, '07, 02:56

u can drown in half an inch of water homboi


Take that as a subliminal 2, I wonder if theres a chance u might wanna test this

This is tha truth bitch, yur not tha king till u beat tha king, that MIGHT NOT be me, but regardless u haven't beat tha king, check tha last line ACES HIGH!
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